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Good, good. Now I won't have to have Metaljack take you back to farm and convert you.
Now how will she react when she wakes up?
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I forgot to ask, but what the heck is Metaljack? xD
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Metaljack a horror version of Applejack, that I thought up for a story I was gonna write for Halloween last year, but I never got around to finish it.
Basically, Applejack ends up losing her hind-legs, but got replacements from Flim and Flam. But something horrible happens and more and more of her body had to be replace with more machinery... and well you can see where she got her name.
Finally, oh the anticipation. Keep it up, I love this story. Celestia better tread lightly now, it was not Twilights fault, to imprison her would be like imprisoning a knife fore being used to murder someone instead of the murderer. But I have a feeling if she does decide to sacrifice her student for the"GREATER GOOD" she might find herself with six shadow infested ponies. They broke their promise once, and look what it cost Twilight, so it would be only fair that they join her if equestria is only going to see her as a monster. Being friends means making the right choice for them, even if it means giving up the things you want the most. If I remember the last version right the thing possessing Twilight came from a very peculiar origin.
Nice Pinkie fourth wall comment
Wonder what's next
Honestly, I can’t blame the guard here.
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How could anyone in that position?
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You should finish it ^^
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I know, right?
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Sounds similar to the Tin Woodman. Though Flim and Flam probably are more negligent than evil.
Getting a real Hate Opened Wide vibe from this and I freaking love it.
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I intend to, I'm just working on two other stories at the moment is all.
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That's the point. And that will make her pain all the worse.
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Makes sense.
*devilfish arrives*
*leans out*
"Oh, oh my"
Calling out to twilight and dimmed star " don't worry about be I'm just here to make sure he is alive and able to continue the story after your done with him, here."
*throws a syringe of adrenaline to dimmed star*
"That'll keep him awake a bit longer."
*grabs popcorn*
"Dis gonna be gud"
sighs, preparing a regeneration spell for shaded
*cough*
Well then
*cracking sounds*
Shall we?
This will only take about 2 hours
Edit 4 hours later:
*COUGH*
I mean, maybe 2 hours from now
Saying sorry about something that isn't because of you is such a cliché thing, but I think it fits RDs character
Fluttershy used stare
It wasn't very effective...
Fluttershy used stare again. It was super effective!
Is Raritee actually capable of this? I think Twi would be able, even as a unicorn, (and I mean the normal Twi, not this better version) or is Raritie just buffed?
Oh wow, Pinkie said something without breaking anything
Stop right there
, criminal scum!See, this is the conclusion you could have made almost (what I assume is) like a minute ago! That one minute might be crucial, and your dear Sunbutt's life could depend on it.
I want to imagine this being said like slirgth or something along those lines
Jackie Chan
sigh There we go, broken again.
OH!? REALLY!? I HAVEN'T NOTICED!
Aj confirmed sadist
I bet they're having such a ball in there with Twi, you should go back in Cadie, you're missing all the fun
Cheers
I don't know why, but I feel like saying that in this point. Weird.
I sure hope not
Hoarse. I enjoy this
You know he probably just fell asleep. Nothing more.
Unnecessary Capitals Are Unnecessary
Does Celestia's voice count as a battle sound? 'Cus I would assume if you can hear it in there, it would be heard outside the room too.
Hmmm, well ain't that nice? Imagine that with like, if you had a child and every time you look at him/her you saw a mass murderer.
"I don't get paid enough for this" is a quote that is quite fitting for any guards here. Sure it's their job... but still.
c:
Noooo
NOOOOO
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
HMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, anyways, onwards...
Uuuuh, uuuuuh, please make the element become corrupted!
...darn
YES!!
For now...
Hmmmh, yes, I'm sure those will help against a possible threat that overpowered krhmone and a half princesseskrhm two princesses
Darn, I wanted an explosion so I could have said that they're having a blast
Well, maybe next time.
Hurray to 1 am, the time I write this!
I was so worried yesterday. I thought the story had been taken down or something. Good to see your rewrite is still going strong.
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This Feels trip has no breaks! xD
Well, hopefully Twilight can do some research into the entity. Although the fact that she killed at least a couple of people won`t be very good for her mental health.