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Who'd want to hurt that stallion more, Vaati (EWM) or Destroyah (The Bridge)?
The torture and death in the end of chapter author notes isn't funny anymore, please end that running gag.
Other than that, I'm still loving this storyđź‘Ť
LOL like crap, that dude deserves everything coming his way.
So by my count, one death, one...in progress, two cases of ptsd, and one filly being led off by the fey. Busy night.
Well , if we consider Cheerilee , at least one positive thing happened in this chapter ?
Also Dimmed was a bit lacking method wise in this chapter. Why waste time running there and searching the house , when you had a perfectly good torture candidate to extract informations out of in the first place (especially since you already knew what to expect at the house , more or less.)
Then again , I don't see how anyone , except Scoot herself , could know about Scoots whereabouts.
Very Nice
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Yeah, hurting a child like that sort of removes any rights he previously had, ANd in this situation Cheerilee most likely wouldn't mind if he died, Of couse I doubt she'd give the order or do it herself, but I can't see her caring if he died after what happened.
Cheerilee...this stallion was violently abusing his child, who is just a defenseless filly and to top it off, he just attempted to violently murder you with his cold hooves. And you want to show mercy towards him...
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I think I speak for all who are following this story when I say.....you know I can't say it. Jeffy, Can you ask her for me please?
They need to get their act together. None of this is Dimmed Star's fault, and if they abandoned her outright it will only make her lose herself to the darkness that much faster. Their love is the only thing keeping it at bay, and if all they have to show for her in her time of need is fear, distrust, and trying to pass the buck, she will undoubtedly become a moster that solely exists to consume.
Maybe she should just say 'fuck all of you' and take Spike and Scootaloo and retreat into the shadows, never to be seen in be seen in daylight again.
Okay, seriously. This is an amazing story so far, but the running author note gag with the characters torturing/killing you is actually turning me off from it enough that I'm seriously considering abandoning it. It's out of left field as far as I'm concerned, and I honestly don't find it very funny
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If you will, have a look at my latest Blog post as I address this very topic. Please dont give up just yet!
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How many times are you gonna die in the Author’s note my guy?
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I actually rather enjoy the running gag myself find it rather humorous and fitting to end the chapter that way especially the more darker ending as it tends to lighten the blow abit
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Call me gullible, but I'm still convinced that they'll do the right thing and bring her back.
How far along the story are we? About how many more chapters can we expect?
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Well she seems to do nothing but Chase them away when they do try and how she seemed to be pretty much regretless at what she did to Pinkie pie, despite Pinkie being the only one brave enough to be around her. she's really not making it easy for them to work up the courage to approach her.
This should especially easy to understand with Fluttershy who's probably to scared to leave her home right now.
Well then, somehow, you have managed to keep making your story darker and darker. Good job.