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Well look at this, karma is a bitch, don't you think Hasty vote?
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And she comes in so many flavors
Finally updated, I Knew nothing could keep Dimmed Star tied down for long. Foolish Hasty Vote, DS already doubts the integridy of those she believed loved her, how dare you interrupt a tender moment that I'm sure Dimmed Star believed she would have again.
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On that note, how do you feel the emotion was handled in this chapter?
YARRR SPOILERS AHEAD MATEYS
And so we will finally see the cour-
...oh
You really cursing her? You could have died right there, you should thank your luck you didn't!
Did she fecking look like a normal unicorn to you when she tried to eat you?
She? Hmm... Another queenie perhaps?
FINALLY
HERE WE GO
HAHAAHAHHAHAHAAAAA
Take that
Aah, yes, throw a rock at the face of a hydra
Uhmmm...
Awww
Now kill her.
10 bucks on Hasty and/or Savvy getting killed or otherwise hurt until the end of this chapter
Oh stallion, the things I would do to you
Yeeeeesshhhh...
Awww, so cute, let's open them
your seats
Aka, remove the restrains or you will face the most agonizing fate possible
Like you made Twilight's parents wake her up without asking anyone else?
I also want to imagine Hasty sitting there with a pink sweater and smiling like this
I'm a funny mare
Clap along if you feel like a room without a roof
Teehee, I'm enjoying
Told ya
Removed from the court room, not alive that is
As my native isn't English I really got confused there for a moment
The same as above.
*puts on nerdy glasses*
Actually! You cannot rescue a patient if he has already flatlined, he's dead.
No wait... NO
Where's all the blood!? Injured/dead Savvy and Hasty!?
Damnit...
Welp, I owe 10 bucks to everyone...
...in their face that is
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*puts on nerdier glasses*
Except that's kinda why the defibrillator was made in the first place. Until the brain stops functioning, the patient is not lost. Flatline merely means the heart has stopped beating. If the doctors react fast enough, the heart can be restarted before the brain dies.
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Darn
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Upon further research, it appears I was only half right. It's not a defibrillator that is used when a patient flatlines. But the second half of my comment stands.
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Yes, and I apologize for being wrong, I'm only human, and I'm not doctor or any other field of patient curing, not even a witch sadly
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I'm not a doctor either. I wasn't holding anything against you.
I have to say Shaded , you are really good at making me hate those court/noble ponies.
Then again , I am saying that in every comment at this point
I was litteraly cheering when Dimmed decided to shut them up for a bit... now it feels like she is in control , and things are about to get fun.
I mean , she was before , but they didn't know it yet
Also , having read the blog post , don't worry too much about courtroom accuracy...or better yet , derail the procedure enough that it doesn't matter.
After all the Princess should have , at least , enough power to take a decision herself if the proceeding devolved enough (into chaos or whatever) ... or if everyone else present that is competant is legaly or litteraly unable to make a decision , thus defaulting to her to override the thing.
Just doing guesswork here , I don't know enough about monarchy to do a really educated guess. Now , if we were talking about french courtrooms , I could help more , but here not so much .
This was really good,a very nice chapter. I am happy to say I am definitely going to love this story.
Congratulations shadey, you brought back twi's emotions and I am happy that twilight isn't just a murderer now in this story but still has her feelings and ties to others also yay foreshadowing! I actually think this might end up being much better than the foreshadowing in the original story. Sure I still miss chrysalis getting strung up and ripped apart limb by limb (gruesome, horrifying and beautiful like an art form) but the idea that chrysalis survived means we might get to see more of her, or will help to show the power of our foreshadowed antagonist (hopefully through the earlier mentioned death.) Also lastly, buck you Hasty! I am so happy she's finally getting what she deserves. Karma hurts!
All in all, this was, a really good chapter and I hope to see more,thank you for this lovely story shaded blood,I do hope we get to see more soon, oh, and don't get yourself burnt alive by a certain purple unicorn
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It's not a defib? Well what is it? I tried to research it but came up with zilch, not even Google has given me a straight answer
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I wasn't quite able to find the answer...Maybe you could make a mention in the Author's Notes next chapter that you are aware a defibrillator is unable to revive people from flatlining, but you were unable to find out what is really used?
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That will probably be what I need to do lol
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After a bit more thorough research into the fact, I've found that in medical terms, when a patient is flat-lining it is labeled a Code Blue status emergency.
A Code Blue is issued when a patient is suffering from Cardiopulmonary Arrest and requires immediate resuscitation.
The situation starts with clearing the airways of the patient and moving their head and neck, if able, to free up their esophagus. Afterwards compressions upon the patient's chest would begin until the AED/Defib Unit arrived in the unfortunate case that it would be necessary. Which here, it most definitely is necessary lol.
Note I pulled all of this from Google so I can't be 100% certain lol.
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pretty well, though AJ and Rainbow need to rein in their laughter and realize how serious this is, Twilight is not the only one in her body now. She shares it with an entity that has no prior motive other then destruction and death
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Your right that the situation is serious, but if the story was all seriousness all the time, then it would get rather dull. Also, I think you typoed AJ instead of Pinkie lol, it was her and RD who were laughing, and honestly, would you really put it past those two to laugh at their friend falling asleep during her own Court Hearing? Clearly Dimmed Star isn't taking the situation very seriously either, but that's simply because she just doesn't care lol.
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She is beyond normal ponies now, nothing they do can threaten her. I bet only the elements of harmony could harm her and low and behold, their one member short. But they had better tread carefully, Dimmed Star might be bursting with evil magic but her trigger is like that of an aggressive animal. If those guards had not interfered with her hunt of Queen Chrysalis they might not have died.
Ah. How amusing. Hasty Vote is getting the exact same treatment she gave Dimmed Star. Funny how what's perfectly just and reasonable to the one in charge suddenly becomes a very bad thing when it happens to them instead of being done by them isn't it?
Given that she also intended to have Dimmed Star executed without fair trial... I don't give high odds of Hasty Vote getting out of this room alive unless she gets a punishment that Dimmed Star wants her to suffer for the rest of her existence.
Oi where's the next chapter
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Patience young Padawan
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Oops I threw my Patience out the car
*stands up and approaches dimmed star*
"I'm staying on her good side, unless i need to try to rescue shaded buuut i was paid off this time."
Bravo, Shaded Blood. You have successfully created the pony version of Dolores Umbridge in Hasty Vote. Bravo.
But seriously, I'm enjoying this story so much!
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My thoughts exactly
It is clear that Twilight is still somewhat in control of herself, and that she is very intelligent, so I do hope she complies with the trial for the most part, just to garner some respect... FROM THOSE WHO DESERVE IT