Another beautiful story, i almost died when he hit milky though. I cannot imagine what will happen next, or even if this storyline is complete. I really hope it isn't and this stuff really needs to be made into a film, or even a show... javascript:smilie('');
Seriously with that attitude towards nonhumans, how again are they justifying this rage of a mindless animal? Sorry but this chapter blows for me, for having not given any perspective into the opposition. This is just after haven reada fic that had simpler tones in but handled it all better this one instance.
I really doubt her parents will do anything close to arson and vandalism, they seem far more likely the types who would goad someone else into doing it for them and cheering on the results with smug self-righteousness. Give it a few days before something burns down or a mob of anti-pony humans show up to do something similar, or attempt to. This town is not exactly right next to the human/pony border and the population does have some mixed couples in it already, not to mention it's a pony town which wouldn't take too kindly to a mob of humans trying to start a ruckus.
2156039 Actually, never. Opinionated? Absolutely. Traditional? Often, sure, but aren't you also holding people to a standard and berating them if not?
I don't know how much across the bellcurve you call the religious crazy but though they cry the most attention they are rare to come by. But some people like to pry negative stereotypes from one group and shrug off ones from their own.
Men I wonder what will be their opinion if they saw Discord. Hell I wonder if he awake again and still evil, humans can be chaotic I think he could find one or two nut jobs that can be eager to spread chaos here and there
These parents... are just strawmen to be honest. ^^; But that chapter was still pretty awesome and how he stands up to his parents.
“At least I don’t pray to a false deity.”
Actually I know two dudes who met a guy who talks to God who said he "just doesn't care." (I wonder if someone will get that reference) Though in my opinion I believe he rewards people who uses their free will "properly" (i.e. figure things out yourself).
As horrible as it may sound, I do have to agree with his mother's point about pony doctors, they walk on them all day, and even if they sterilised them in some way, I would not feel comfortable unless they wore so,e form of glove. Anyway, not my favourite chapter, but I still like it, and I'm glad Milky didn't immediately marry him.
I have to say though i wasn't especting his (your? our? WHATEVER) dad to nearly NEARLY MIND YOU apologize for striking her....ummmmm.....will they reconsider relationships between human and pony? or will they accept their (your? Our?........DAMN IT ALL!) son's choice?
I was listening to Iron Maiden's The Wicker Man and the chorus came on. Your time did come Anon's asshole parents. And that false deity thing that was fucking awesome!!!
2156716 That is why a said, if he free himself and is still evil. Humans can be naturally chaotic if the have being for some time, they could have free Discord by accident
And I've always seen Celestia/Luna/Cadence/and now Twilight As loving nuturing goddesses, much like my religion paints my mother godess to be so MLP has always been a minute (I don't get all crazy and religious about it) win for me.
And to see two OVERLY religious god spewing morons brutally taken down like that, you sire have just made me a vey happy Pagen.
This has been nice and all but why wasn't the father character arrested for assault in addition to being deported for the physical abuse to an Equestrian citizen or get his passport revoked? 20+ witnesses saw everything. I know if I owned a restaurant and I saw that shit, I'd call the police regardless, if anything to make sure the patrons wouldn't leave my eatery and create an negative publicity with people whispering, "Yeah, the owner saw everything and didn't do anything to stop it." I think I feel sympathy for the restaurant and its employees, management and patrons. In a big city like Trottingham, customers can be fickle and with other options for dining, the food services industry can be uncertain and even an incident like this can scare off potential diners and cause a financial loss.
Nitpicking aside, this was still a good chapter with Milky and Anonymous Human-658 still being likeable and adorable.
Really love this story! I really feel when reading this, like exploring a whole new world, ment both metaphorically and not ^^ Though, I personally prefer less clop parts. Keep the chapters coming! Seriously, make it at LEAST 10 chaps longer :3
I like how you have illustrated how those anti-social parents drove their own son away, even from their religion. Well done. Funny thing is, the protagonist has acted more Christian than the parents (you know, by not acting violent and hateful).
that....THAT!!! oh my gosh. that was amazing to say the least! the way milky told em off made me laugh yet the suspence and tension made my blood boil i don't know how i did it but i was on the edge of my seat, while reading a fic. That was- wow. Just wow. I haulted a LOL farming marathon just to sneak a peak at this then ended up reading it all. I feel so dam refreshed xD
you sir are a magnificent BASTARD. your story has captavated me in so many ways that you cant even imagine im glad you moved this from a one shot to a full on story please continue and may the best of luck come to you in your life for your stories, family, friends, and most importantly yourself
2155853 WoW for all 14 people that down voted this, you take life waaay to seriously lol. What happened to the love, and tolerance people? where did it all go? To the Moon with all 14 of you!!!!!!!! And the 3 that liked it thank you and in the words of the Manliest Brony "stay brony my friends"
Pretty much laughing the whole time, because my parents would never be like this! IT'S NOT POSSIBLE. This chapter is friggin' awesome.... I think it's also partially because I love argueing. I like how Twilight was included as one of the gods in Equestria, even though I hate her. Racists, and crazy Christians, they do not belong. Thing about marriage, I really liked that, HMM... MORE OF THIS.
First !!!!! you don't know how long i've wanted to do that!!! Ill read the story now
Well... Skyrim can wait a tiny bit.
Amazing as always.
Another beautiful story, i almost died when he hit milky though.
I cannot imagine what will happen next, or even if this storyline is complete. I really hope it isn't and this stuff really needs to be made into a film, or even a show... javascript:smilie('');
Sir. You are just... fantastic. No fancy wordplay needed. You deserve eternal happieness for this story.
Oh sweet Celestia, another good chapter. And if my father didn't bring the ruler up his ass, then I shall bring it.
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Okay, now where's my father?
Please don't let my father read this comment...
That was beautiful.
Now I have to wonder what the parents are going to do though.
...
They're going to find her dairy burned to the ground in the morning aren't they.
great chapter once again! keep up the good work
2155853 technically you're the 701st
Seriously with that attitude towards nonhumans, how again are they justifying this rage of a mindless animal?
Sorry but this chapter blows for me, for having not given any perspective into the opposition. This is just after haven reada fic that had simpler tones in but handled it all better this one instance.
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I really doubt her parents will do anything close to arson and vandalism, they seem far more likely the types who would goad someone else into doing it for them and cheering on the results with smug self-righteousness. Give it a few days before something burns down or a mob of anti-pony humans show up to do something similar, or attempt to. This town is not exactly right next to the human/pony border and the population does have some mixed couples in it already, not to mention it's a pony town which wouldn't take too kindly to a mob of humans trying to start a ruckus.
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You've never met a hypocritical religious nutjob?
Brilliant!
2156039 Actually, never. Opinionated? Absolutely. Traditional? Often, sure, but aren't you also holding people to a standard and berating them if not?
I don't know how much across the bellcurve you call the religious crazy but though they cry the most attention they are rare to come by. But some people like to pry negative stereotypes from one group and shrug off ones from their own.
OH YES, that was AWESOME!!! Take that you racist bastards. Wow, I'm really getting worked up over this... eh, I guess it's ok. hehe.
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Goddamn you beat me to it!
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Well, I'll just post one anyway.
Men I wonder what will be their opinion if they saw Discord. Hell I wonder if he awake again and still evil, humans can be chaotic I think he could find one or two nut jobs that can be eager to spread chaos here and there
These parents... are just strawmen to be honest. ^^; But that chapter was still pretty awesome and how he stands up to his parents.
Actually I know two dudes who met a guy who talks to God who said he "just doesn't care." (I wonder if someone will get that reference) Though in my opinion I believe he rewards people who uses their free will "properly" (i.e. figure things out yourself).
I see what you did there.
As horrible as it may sound, I do have to agree with his mother's point about pony doctors, they walk on them all day, and even if they sterilised them in some way, I would not feel comfortable unless they wore so,e form of glove. Anyway, not my favourite chapter, but I still like it, and I'm glad Milky didn't immediately marry him.
oh hell YEAH! EPIC BURN! Milkly your awesome.
I have to say though i wasn't especting his (your? our? WHATEVER) dad to nearly NEARLY MIND YOU apologize for striking her....ummmmm.....will they reconsider relationships between human and pony? or will they accept their (your? Our?........DAMN IT ALL!) son's choice?
Only time will tell......and I hope its soon
Swag
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Since this seems to be following the show by Twilight being a Princess, Discord is likely free and reformed.
I was listening to Iron Maiden's The Wicker Man and the chorus came on. Your time did come Anon's asshole parents. And that false deity thing that was fucking awesome!!!
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That is why a said, if he free himself and is still evil. Humans can be naturally chaotic if the have being for some time, they could have free Discord by accident
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I'm obviously Pagen
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And I've always seen Celestia/Luna/Cadence/and now Twilight
As loving nuturing goddesses, much like my religion paints my mother godess to be so MLP has always been a minute (I don't get all crazy and religious about it) win for me.
And to see two OVERLY religious god spewing morons brutally taken down like that, you sire have just made me a vey happy Pagen.
(I'm so glad I followed this story)
This has been nice and all but why wasn't the father character arrested for assault in addition to being deported for the physical abuse to an Equestrian citizen or get his passport revoked? 20+ witnesses saw everything. I know if I owned a restaurant and I saw that shit, I'd call the police regardless, if anything to make sure the patrons wouldn't leave my eatery and create an negative publicity with people whispering, "Yeah, the owner saw everything and didn't do anything to stop it." I think I feel sympathy for the restaurant and its employees, management and patrons. In a big city like Trottingham, customers can be fickle and with other options for dining, the food services industry can be uncertain and even an incident like this can scare off potential diners and cause a financial loss.
Nitpicking aside, this was still a good chapter with Milky and Anonymous Human-658 still being likeable and adorable.
Never before have I wanted to punch a couple of fictional characters so much.
Also, Milky just won everything in this chapter.
HE FINALLY BECAME A MAN, when he confronted with his parents, -sniff- so proud.
Racist pricks.
Milky is amazing
Really love this story! I really feel when reading this, like exploring a whole new world, ment both metaphorically and not ^^
Though, I personally prefer less clop parts.
Keep the chapters coming! Seriously, make it at LEAST 10 chaps longer :3
I like how you have illustrated how those anti-social parents drove their own son away, even from their religion. Well done. Funny thing is, the protagonist has acted more Christian than the parents (you know, by not acting violent and hateful).
Please write the wedding day! I can't get enough of this story!
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... Screw it, I'm ditchin class today.
Edit: It was worth it!!! DAMN PEOPLE LIKE THE PARENTS!! they make the rest of us look bad.
I tried to describe how amazing and heartfelt this story is, but I ran out of adjectives. So, have an unrelated pic:
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I need more. Feed my addiction, you magnificent creature.
that....THAT!!!
oh my gosh. that was amazing to say the least!
the way milky told em off made me laugh yet the suspence and tension made my blood boil
i don't know how i did it but i was on the edge of my seat, while reading a fic. That was- wow. Just wow.
I haulted a LOL farming marathon just to sneak a peak at this then ended up reading it all. I feel so dam refreshed xD
you sir are a magnificent BASTARD. your story has captavated me in so many ways that you cant even imagine im glad you moved this from a one shot to a full on story please continue and may the best of luck come to you in your life for your stories, family, friends, and most importantly yourself
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Trust me, "hypocritical religious nutjobs" like this, exist.
And now, I am happy that that is over with.
. . . Right?
Perfect, just perfect. This chapter was everything I expected it to be and more.
2155853 WoW for all 14 people that down voted this, you take life waaay to seriously lol. What happened to the love, and tolerance people? where did it all go? To the Moon with all 14 of you!!!!!!!! And the 3 that liked it thank you and in the words of the Manliest Brony "stay brony my friends"
2156214 Now I'm going to imagine two ponies in the restaurant shouting this when she says that.
Fuck yes
I love this story.... He finally grew a pair and stood up for Milky
That was good, I shall now follow you sir
Pretty much laughing the whole time, because my parents would never be like this! IT'S NOT POSSIBLE. This chapter is friggin' awesome.... I think it's also partially because I love argueing. I like how Twilight was included as one of the gods in Equestria, even though I hate her.
Racists, and crazy Christians, they do not belong.
Thing about marriage, I really liked that, HMM... MORE OF THIS.
'KnowING'
A period '.' should end this sentence.
'you' (again )
One 'metaphorical' eye between the both of them? Or is it actually a mistake?
I think you mean "can'T"
'at first'
'humans'
They're both looking so it's just 'look'.
Even in his livid state, 'my' father would still say 'an ugly,...' wouldn't he?
If this keeps up, you may need a proofreader to look it over and show you any errors and such. Still very intense regardless.
2155995 Fracas!! Pinkie, they're both the same!
2159888 At least those (now) 16 people gave your "first!" what it deserved.
2160465 Thank you very much.
I'd promise that the next chapter would be error free, but that would probably be a lie.
2160556 Any time, my bro(ny)