• Published 11th Nov 2012
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Discords Horrid Attack - HookLined



My OC's day when discord broke out.

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Chapter 1

The air grew cold, my arms disconnected from my body and, as I felt the chocolate rain fall upon
me I thought to myself. “Why?” It all started three days ago it was the town’s annual festival and
everypony was setting up the decor. My job was to provide the guests with adequate games to play. I
had a group of fillies to come up with some games for the others and they were a huge help. We all
knew was needed and when it had to be done. But then he came.

The streets lifted, the sky grew pink and chocolate milk rained from the sky. Ponies eyes started
to twist, colors started to change and attitudes started to worsen. As I ran for my house I suddenly stop
to find that the little area I was in was now floating about a thousand feet in the air. I jumped back and
ran inside the storage house we shutdown two years ago. My heart racing, my head pounding and my
knees shackling. I went to look outside the window and there he was transforming birds into horses.
And ponies into food. My stomach twisted as I saw the four fillies I had helping me under a crate. I
opened the door and ran out to save them before they got hurt. I grabbed one of their hoofs and the
others followed along side. We get back into the storage house and shut the door. When we thought we
were all safe, we could here this devilish laugh behind us. We turned in fear and sitting on a silk red
wooden chair drinking a glass of chocolate milk was him. “Discord.” I said in complete shock. He then
floated towards us saying “well what do we have here a group of stragglers who thought hiding would
save them.” He then chuckled and turned one of the fillies into a rabbit.

I stood there horrified staring at my friend who was now equivalent to the animal at home. I
look at the girls and nod. We then bolt out of the building as fast as we could run. I then thought to
myself “I’m a moron I’m a Pegasus I can fly.” So I grabbed the young lings I jumped off the sky island.
Gliding gently down my wings suddenly disappear and I fall through a house holding the ponies in my
arms so they can use my body as a airbag. And as my body cringed in pain from the fall. I couldn’t help
but think why? Why did my wings give out? I then looked on my sides my wings they..t-they were gone.
I snapped back into reality and noticed the fillies unconscious next to me. I checked them for a pulse it
was faint but there. I rushed towards the hospital to find it in shambles only some of the doctors were
able to move the others disabled. I rushed over to a dear friend of mine that worked there “redheart
you have to help them. Please!” She was shocked to see the fillies in such bad condition so she got to
them first. She wanted me to be treated but I replied “I’m not as hurt as the rest of these ponies you get
to them first. I have something I need to take care of.”

I ran out of the collapsed building as fast as I could. I ran from district to district searching and
then I found him. He was relaxing in a chair drinking a glass of chocolate milk laughing as he turned a
nice couple into a batch of cookies and milk. I charged at him at full speed but before I got to the chair
he was gone. I stopped eyes wide open questioning “where…where did he go!?” Before I could even get
a glance he appeared behind me and launched me into the sky. At first I was cool with it since I was a
Pegasus but then it hit me my wings are gone. I screamed in terror as I fell but then I saw a cloud
underneath me. I was safe I closed my eyes and put my hooves out. When I opened them I was still
falling I apparently lost all the abilities a Pegasus had and was turned into a regular earthbound pony. As
I screamed in terror I landed in a tree. Must have broke like twelve branches along with three bones.
Cringing in pain I cried out for help, but what I got wasn’t what I was hoping for. Discord chuckling as he
stood over me. I pleaded to him to not hurt me. He just laughed and laughed and laughed. Before too

long I was lifted into the air again but this time held in place. Both my front hooves snapped and I let out
a yelp. Discord notice the sound and said “oh you poor thing here I’ll make it better” and before too long
my front legs fell off and landed on the ground. I was scared as I looked over it looked as if I never had
legs there to begin with. He then dropped me and walked off. I was dismal wondering if I was going to
be like this forever then I flash of light happened. When I opened my eyes the town was back to normal
everypony was healed of their injuries and I was back to normal as well. But the best thing was that
discord was now a stone statue in the square. We continued the festival and we were all happy once
more. The festival was massive we had ponies from dusk to dawn partying. As I went to sit down the little fillies ran up to me faces smiling as hard as they could at me. I couldn't hold myself so i picked them up a gave them a big hug. I was so happy to see that they were okay and not hurt anymore. They than ran off to their booths and had many games for the other children to play. I sighed to myself and thought "Today was definitely my most noblest of days." So I went to the dance floor and showed redheart that I am the best when it comes to salsa dancing.

Comments ( 3 )

1596985 I understand the mistakes this was my first fanfic and I had to do this for classwork in English she told us me that we are not allowed to correct our mistakes. So meaning non stop typing no backspacing what so ever.

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