A human mercenary named Kris is found unconscious on the outerbanks of the everfree forest where he is taken to ponyville. The story of how and why he is in the area is revealed and how he became a merc.
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I suck at writing Fanfics and there are too many critics on the damn site.
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WALL OF TEXT DETECTED!
REMEMBER TO SEPERATE DIALOG IN THEIR OWN LINES!
YOU WILL NOT GO FAR WITH THIS KIND OF FORMATTING, CHANGE NOW!
2132889 I know, I know but it was months ago I did this and when I learned about all those different things I was too lazy to go back and change them I will continue the story in this format just cause it would look strange transitioning from my bad format to my attempt at the new format. So sorry again for the bad story hope you follow me.
Aaagh, Wall o' text.
However an extremely good idea and story. I just can't get into it 'cause wall of text.
cant wait for next chapter
I give up. I tried to read this story, it seems like it has alot of potential.
But I can't say that fore sure because of the freaking all of text.
2579959
Well if it makes you feel better I fixed the format.
2144949
I changed its format
its pretty good hope to see more man.
After taking a huge hiatus from writing im gonna start again with shorter stories and hopefully not Mary sue stories.
I will however stop making chapters for The War of Sentient Races. Since all I ever got was bad reviews and that even I don't feel okay with continuing with it.