• Member Since 8th Nov, 2012
  • offline last seen Sep 9th, 2017

Rain Dance


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This is a story about Rarity losing her cutiemark. While she and her friends in the main 6 and the Cutie Mark Crusaders is out looking for it more mystical things happen to them. Shadows lure in every corner. There are new dangers all the time!

I wanna give a lot of credit to Sektrex for helping me with grammar!

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It's an interesting concept, but I found it hard going due to the poor spelling in places and general wording. I'm going to assume English isn't your first language though? It just needs a proof read really, and rewording in places, and it would be a lot better! :twilightsmile:

1622184 Yes i know, i have a friend that might be on it as fast as she get the time for it! :) But thank you anyways! :)

And (Obviously) it's a work in progress. :)

I can imagine this as a legit episode

I wanna give a lot of credit to my friend for this. He is called Sektrex! He was the one fixing with the grammar.

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