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PinkiePie37


The only thing you need to know about me is that Ps3luver is the most awesome person ever! Also, Pinkie Pie is best pony.

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(Second person fic starring YOU and PINKIE PIE!)One day, after Pinkie's party, you felt a slight, emptiness, so you decided to go to her house and see her to see if that would get her off your mind, she wasn't there, when you were walking home, you had a faithful encounter with a certain someone.

This is only my first fan fic, so please don't be to strict about it, and i know it's really short, I'm sorry. But thanks for reading!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 23 )

Hmm...

I like it!

I have to ask...

Do you really mean "faithful" in the title or should it be "That Fateful Day"? :derpytongue2:

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Oh hey SonicRainboomGirl! :pinkiegasp:

Cut Him/Her some slack, its her first Fic. :twilightangry2:
sure its short and its not very Edited, But i doubt your first Fic was Picture Perfect :trixieshiftright:

I Personally i think He/She did a wonderful Job :pinkiesmile:

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no need to be sorry, Really :twilightsheepish:

I found it easy to read, mainly because i focus more on the Fiction then the Quality.

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False.
My Little Dashie and Just Dropping In are both perfect fics. :trollestia:

1564573 Have to agree with SonicRainboom. MLD was good, but there was quite a lot of room for improvement.

1564356 Just be glad this isn't bad enough to warrant a look in from the Train Wreck Explorers. Saying that this is the author's first fic will only get you even harsher criticism from them.

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TrainWreckExplorers?

1564688 Click the link, you'll find out.

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I did, They seem like TOTAL ASSHOLES!

1564706 Yes, because giving harsh yet true criticism is a dickish thing to do. Tough love, I'm afraid. At least they actually make an effort to help authors improve, even if it seems like they're just being assholes.

Like I said, be glad this story's good enough to pass them by.

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Thank Celestia for that

Thanks guys! I'm sorry for being bad with grammar! =( And I'm a he if anyone cares! This is my first, and I'm very sorry if its not perfect. And i have another fic on he way, i can post the first chapter if you guys want. Leave answer in the comments! And thanks for your support! You guys are the best! And can you guys please tell me how this is hard to read? I don't know what you mean.

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Okay, i fixed the name! Thanks for telling me! XD

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Thank you! I really appreciate it! XD

I laughed the whole way through :D :pinkiehappy:

I really like it; nice work! I'll read the second chapter after dinner. :pinkiesmile:

She locked the door for one of these two reasons 1:cupcakes 2:you know what:unsuresweetie:

Take your pick

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