Chapter 2
As you entered your home you sat down on your bed and motioned for Pinkie to sit down next to you. She came over and sat down.
“So, I have to confess, after the party last night, you, Pinkie, just could not escape my mind. While I was working on the schematics, all I could think about was you. Even today AT work, all that was on my mind was you.” You said as you poured out your feelings. Pinkie jumped slightly in shock. She looked at you and said, “Me too! The only thing that was on my mind today was you. I don’t know why. This has never happened ever before. I was a little scared to tell you, in fright of you not feeling the same way.” Pinkie said. You stared into each other’s eyes as you shared a precious moment.
“Pinkie, I-I think, I’m in love with you.” You said as your eyes were still locked.
“Really? I think I’m in love with you too.” Pinkie had said in a low, calm voice. You continued to stare into each other’s eyes. Then, you both slowly started to come closer to each other until your lips touched and you shared a deep, passionate kiss as you both moaned in pleasure. You then pulled away as you stared into Pinkie’s blue eyes.
“No, I am I love with you.” You say as you both share another deep, passionate kiss.
“Miph Moph Mooph Moph” Pinkie muffled as you continued to kiss. You stopped your kissing and said
“What?”
“I was trying to say ‘I love you too.’” Pinkie said. “You know what we should do to celebrate our newfound love!?”
“What should we do?” You said, knowing the answer to the question.
“THROW A PARTY!” Pinkie said in glee and delight. You then chuckled happily at the mare’s joyful spirit and loving heart. “I have to bake, and decorate, and…” Pinkie trailed off as she walked towards the door. She then stopped talking and turned around and looked at you.
“Are you coming with?”
“Oh, I didn’t know you wanted me to come with you.” You had said
“Why wouldn’t I? First of all, we love each other, so I want to be with you, and second, you’re invited! Why wouldn’t you be?” The excited Pinkie had said as she jumped in delight.
“Oh, okay!” You said as you stood up and walked out the door with Pinkie. You then locked your house up, and caught up to Pinkie. When you got to her house, she rushed in and looked at the clock.
“Aw! It’s 8:00!? We can’t throw a party now! It’s Monday, everyone has to work tomorrow!” she had said, a sad look in her eyes.
“Pinkie, no, it’s okay, we can have one tomorrow, we can make the invitations today, then have it tomorrow.” You said. She then perked up.
“Oh yeah, I wonder why I didn’t think of that myself?” Pinkie said, no longer sad. You then stared making the invitations. You were finished and looked at the clock, you noticed it was 9:00.
“Aw, I’m sorry Pinkie, but I have to go. I have work tomorrow.”
“Oh, you sure you can’t stay? I had something special planned for you and me.” Pinkie had said with a sly smile on her face.
“Oh, well, if you went through the trouble to plan something, then I must see what it is.” You said having an idea on what was going to happen next. She then started walking toward her room as you were walking behind her. You both walked in as she slammed the door shut and locked it.
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I have to ask...
Do you really mean "faithful" in the title or should it be "That Fateful Day"?
1564314
Oh hey SonicRainboomGirl!
Cut Him/Her some slack, its her first Fic.
sure its short and its not very Edited, But i doubt your first Fic was Picture Perfect
I Personally i think He/She did a wonderful Job
1564373
no need to be sorry, Really
I found it easy to read, mainly because i focus more on the Fiction then the Quality.
1564373
False.
My Little Dashie and Just Dropping In are both perfect fics.
1564609
*Okay*
1564573 Have to agree with SonicRainboom. MLD was good, but there was quite a lot of room for improvement.
1564356 Just be glad this isn't bad enough to warrant a look in from the Train Wreck Explorers. Saying that this is the author's first fic will only get you even harsher criticism from them.
1564672
TrainWreckExplorers?
1564688 Click the link, you'll find out.
1564695
I did, They seem like TOTAL ASSHOLES!
1564706 Yes, because giving harsh yet true criticism is a dickish thing to do. Tough love, I'm afraid. At least they actually make an effort to help authors improve, even if it seems like they're just being assholes.
Like I said, be glad this story's good enough to pass them by.
1564733
Thank Celestia for that
Thanks guys! I'm sorry for being bad with grammar! =( And I'm a he if anyone cares! This is my first, and I'm very sorry if its not perfect. And i have another fic on he way, i can post the first chapter if you guys want. Leave answer in the comments! And thanks for your support! You guys are the best! And can you guys please tell me how this is hard to read? I don't know what you mean.
1564328
Okay, i fixed the name! Thanks for telling me! XD
I laughed the whole way through :D
She locked the door for one of these two reasons 1:cupcakes 2:you know what
Take your pick