Twilight has a very strong dislike for Ponyville's new pony Dark Fire. A Pegasus with too much arrogance for his own good. But when he shows Twilight a softer side, she can't help but feel drawn to him. But when his play pony past comes back to haunt him, will Twilight lose the one thing that may be more precious than friendship? TwilightxOC
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Huh. I'm writing a fic where Twilight falls for a pegasus named Borealis... should I cancel mine?
INCOMING STORM OF UPSIDE DOWN THUMBS!
NO! I would hate that... if your a fellow mlp lover than i would luv for you to write your story. i wont get mad at all, in fact i would be proud that im not the only one with an idea like this, so go ahead, and ill read it for sure XD
whats wrong with his designe? I personaly think he looks pretty cool... and is there any other reason u dont like this story besides dark fires's color?
i only just got to this sight and didn't know of all the black and red OC's ok. he was just somepony i thought of and loved, so please don't hate on the story just because his type of charater is a little common, and i am sorry if he;s seems dull and overused to you. i had no idea
Dark fire sounds alot like my OC Darkfire.
i swear to you i had no idea other's had used charaters like him when i create dhim... sorry if he's similier to your charater
It's cool.For what it's worth you nailed him perfectly even the fact that he never knew his family well. He's an orphan
Ill read this soon to form my opinion then give appropriate up-thumbs or down-thumb with why.
I see an error.
I don't think that should be there.
This is awesome, FINALLY, it's continuing. I look forward to more!
Hmm, there's a lot of typos here and there, if you could fix them I'd be able to enjoy the moments shared between those two without cringing as typos ruin the feels~
I think the plots moving a wee bit too fast but all in all it's a good story!
Yay!
you finally uploaded and not just one chapter but two!
PLEASE update more soon, im really enjoying this so far
this is good and i enjoy the attacking of them.
it need a little spelling fixing put that okay.