After Angel went missing, Fluttershy took it upon herself to go looking for him, exploring the Everfree Forest and eventually ending up in a strange, abandoned town she's certain she's never seen before. Beginning to search the twisting and winding alleyways further and further, she quickly realised she was lost - and, on a night like Nightmare Night, her imagination runs rampant as to what sort of horrors lurk within the derelict place. What will she encounter in a place so dark and desolate...?
There's a really scary twist to this one - I promise (so do read it to the end, fellow moustaches).
Technically a crossover between FIM and 'Amnesia: A Machine for Pigs', although only partly.
Happy Halloween & Nightmare Night!
Also, moustaches.
Chapters (1)
Hello
I'm going to give an honest review of this piece right here,
I won't bite...
Much...
Grammar, I could care less, its not written horrifically from what I saw,
but some things could flow smoother. I like the concept, but a few
more word's/scenes here and their wouldn't hurt, and would bring your
word-count up a fair bit.
Over-all i feel that, although in need of a tweaking..
This Fic was pretty good,
Current word count -2270-
I shall watch and hope this number increase's
Also, why don't I get picky over grammar?
I'm Dyslexic and have O.C.D
Ed
Hello Commander.
Zombie Costume Fluttershy research has been complete.
The research: It is not a costume. This specimen seems to be the world's cutest zombie. It is friendly yet shy.
...
Commander, I recommend using Zombie Fluttershy for recon work and feed her brains of fail recruits. I predict troops morale will increase by 19.99%.
Yes thank you the ending was very scary.
Or it soon will be at least.
short story is short
i have no idea what's going on here but
moustaches
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i'm afraid to say the word count will most likely not be increasing
it's a simple short story for nightmare night
i'm glad you liked it though
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Not...
Increasing..? cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-swhoops.png
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Ed
I did not see that coming. Thank fucking Luna. I was beginning to wonder what the fuck was going on. Did you mean a Greek comedy or something???? So glad to see it not that way.
Also
is not correct. No hate to you, but I just don't understand how people think that's what it is. You want either "I'd've" or "I'd have".