Cloud Fishin'

by Church

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To commemorate a very special somepony of mine, who is now, hopefully, proud of me. May you get your wings

This is for you, and everyone else, too...

Thanks for reading.

Comments

[Sypher]

Just when I started to read this,this song came on. I don't think I have any song more fitting. Beautiful story, I like it even more than the first one.

Small error here.

“Remember to aim for the right spot, just like I told you! I don't want you to get or anything, that would be just awful...” Fluttershy reminds me, and I see the spot she’s talkin’ ‘bout.

[Church]

1537182 Whoopsie, thank you

[Church]

1537129 Actually, I know this fact. I wanted to do something with the cloud made of pegasus feathers to neutralize this. Unfortunately, I never got around to explaining that clearly. Call that "laziness" if you wish, or, rather, I wasn't really able to find a way to keep the main in character and describe this. But good note, I knew this would be caught...

[BurntMyWater]

I nearly cried manly tears when I saw this part. I too have experienced death in the family and I hope that special somepony can forgive me for what I did.

Simply beautiful

[Twifight Sparkill]

This story is so beautiful in so many ways. It's creatively complex, appealing to many emotional points and regards, whilst maintaining a placid innocence throughout. It's imaginative, and it lends to a time in our lives when exertion, acceptance and gratitude were plainly earned and remained firmly a parental worship.

Just a great read. As expected from our Church!

Also, this is a thing: Church's Official Group! Join, or accept mediocrity! Philistines! Paltry wastrels! HEED THY RECOMMEND, HEATHENS!

[Church]

1868884 Oh dear. You've come to read what I've written? I thank you for doing so, even though I'm a tad embarrassed...

Thanks

[Seraphimus]

1537315 I understood what was going on, Course I have seen similar concepts in other stories "Special clouds made specifically for non-pegasus to sit/stand on" Yours was A unique way of doing it though that I rather appreciate.

also This story. It was beautiful and brilliant and then? I read this second chapter, and I cried. Literally 31 of the most powerful words I've ever read But they were made such by the beauty of the story before hand.

Thank you for sharing something that is obviously very important and personal to you with us.