Spike has lived his whole life beside Twilight, but has had his true emotions shrouded by his shame. Will the universe bring these two souls closer, or are they to be forever damned to the despair of solitude?
"Its just not right, ponies are destined to be with ponies, and dragons with dragons, there is no grey area."
That is pretty much like the same arguement that people have with gays. The arguement that is "I am unconfortable with this kind of relationship and therefore it is wrong." At the end of the day it is none of your god damned buissness. It doesn't effect you in any way exept that you know about it. This isn't going to end well...
HAHAHAHAAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHHHA....got to love Derpy's last line, that was pure genuis. Well Rarity's reaction was expected but I'm suprised that Rainbow Dash flew away like she did, a bit suprised about Applejack's reaction to....this is going to get hetic, BIG time....amazing job.
1564912 2 things. 1. Epic display pic! 2. I am literally at the edge of the device that is currently used to recline by individuals of a bipedal nature. 2+. and Lyra...
Ohh shite!! That ending I am bursting with laughs right now! I can see Rarity full blown denying their relationship. Applejack and Rainbow dash are on the fence. While I see pinke and fluttershy... Okay(it's the best I've got) with there relationship. The update was fast, and well done ditzy doo, just destroyed the ending. While I know it's hard work to update, please update soon. I have no power and this story entertains me for at least a few hours. So thanks!!
You don't have to ask, but one thing I might do is make my chapters longer (3000)-(5000) words so they may take like 1 day longer, if not, then tomorrow it'll be up.
1565151 Ohh that would be great!! I myself prefer a long chapter to a short one. Even when we have power nothing beats a good book, and sir your story is a great book. so it takes a little longer you keep to schedule and that's in itself is commendable.
1564686 i'm more afraid of granny smith's reaction to tell the truth. applejack and rainbow dash I can handle and if rarity objects then twilight can just chalk it up to jealousy. cause she jumped off the spike train a while back. then flutters is probably gonna have something special in store for the couple and pinkie pie is going to throw a party.I hope Celestia and Luna are open minded enough to accept Twilight's relationship choice.
1565369 That....is logic if I ever heard of the word, great job my friend
1565378 Ink, you don't want to say that to Granny Smith, she will backhoof you if you talk to her like that. Also, which of the gods does the Apples believe in? Celestia? Luna? Candence? Disord? Or other? (by other I mean different animals gods not humans gods my friend)
She is depicted as a pony, viewed in various forms by the three different races of ponies, but I can't say anything more lest I spoil something unknowingly.
Garnny Smith was really unexpected. I wonder why she got so mad. As for the rest... Well I honestly have a bad feeling abuot this, since this is beggining to sound like "Warming up". Thank God this is not an "M" rated fanfic.
Allow me to build up the shitstorm a little more with this chapter
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That is pretty much like the same arguement that people have with gays. The arguement that is "I am unconfortable with this kind of relationship and therefore it is wrong."
At the end of the day it is none of your god damned buissness. It doesn't effect you in any way exept that you know about it.
This isn't going to end well...
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Well its going to happen like this...
NNNNNNOOOOOOO SSSSSPPPPOOOIIIILLLLEEERRRSSSS
1564654 Well damn I guess now I will have to wait for the next chapter...
HAHAHAHAAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHHHA....got to love Derpy's last line, that was pure genuis. Well Rarity's reaction was expected but I'm suprised that Rainbow Dash flew away like she did, a bit suprised about Applejack's reaction to....this is going to get hetic, BIG time....amazing job.
I already feel like shooting Rarity.
Not from what she's done so far but for what I know she's going to do.
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Do it kid, I don't think you've got the moxie
Oh god, all hell is breaking loose!
I fucking hate storms, bro.
Moar soon?
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But of course, dear reader.
> Ditzy Doo
1564912 2 things.
1. Epic display pic!
2. I am literally at the edge of the device that is currently used to recline by individuals of a bipedal nature.
2+. and Lyra...
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The my work so far is a success.
1564963 darn you respond quickly...
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Like this?
Ohh shite!! That ending I am bursting with laughs right now! I can see Rarity full blown denying their relationship. Applejack and Rainbow dash are on the fence. While I see pinke and fluttershy... Okay(it's the best I've got) with there relationship. The update was fast, and well done ditzy doo, just destroyed the ending. While I know it's hard work to update, please update soon. I have no power and this story entertains me for at least a few hours. So thanks!!
1564644 this middle part isnt going to end well
the end will be fantastic.
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You don't have to ask, but one thing I might do is make my chapters longer (3000)-(5000) words so they may take like 1 day longer, if not, then tomorrow it'll be up.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Ohh that would be great!! I myself prefer a long chapter to a short one. Even when we have power nothing beats a good book, and sir your story is a great book. so it takes a little longer you keep to schedule and that's in itself is commendable.
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Thanks, I'm working as we speak.
When I wanna keep a schedule, I keep it.
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HAHAHA!! wish I could do the same if I have a schedule destiny, fate, and time all work against me.
1564686 i'm more afraid of granny smith's reaction to tell the truth. applejack and rainbow dash I can handle and if rarity objects then twilight can just chalk it up to jealousy. cause she jumped off the spike train a while back. then flutters is probably gonna have something special in store for the couple and pinkie pie is going to throw a party.I hope Celestia and Luna are open minded enough to accept Twilight's relationship choice.
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Let me just say this...
SHADDUP GRANDMA, DRINK YOUR PRUNE JUICE!
1565378 I dunno them old fogies are pretty nasty when they want to be.
1565369 That....is logic if I ever heard of the word, great job my friend
1565378 Ink, you don't want to say that to Granny Smith, she will backhoof you if you talk to her like that. Also, which of the gods does the Apples believe in? Celestia? Luna? Candence? Disord? Or other? (by other I mean different animals gods not humans gods my friend)
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The religion I'm about to release is not real and doesn't spoil anything but it does play a part...
They worship Mother Mareia, whose beliefs I will not release...yet...and I guess are pretty obvious.
1565503 Huh......so is the Mother a pony? Dragon? Bear? Zerba? Any type of animal or creature?
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She is depicted as a pony, viewed in various forms by the three different races of ponies, but I can't say anything more lest I spoil something unknowingly.
1565537 Works for me, for new religons....wonder what the other five belive in, or Spike himself...hmmmm.....does Pinkie not believe in any god?
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Pinkie? God? Those words do not fit together, brain.exe.143notfound, initiating self-destruction again.
Another chapter!!! This is one of the only stories I know that isn't taking weeks to update... v.v
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AND IT NEVER WILL BE!
1565610 You....make a very valid point.
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Oh, it's no problem Ink stroke...
Poor twilight & spike, S**Ts about to get REAL!!!
Everyone grab an umbrella, 'cause there's a storm incomin!
I find great irony in the fact one of the few who would endorse their relationship would be Discord.
Damn...element of generosity my ass!!
oh ditzy
also why do I get the feeling pinkie will now be planning a Twilight and Spike are in a relationship party for when they get back
1565537 Make it a zerba! Definitely a Zerba.
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I do apologize, but you made the reference, and now I must post this:
Another damn good chapter keep up the good work
SHIT JUST GOT SERIOUS.
1565946 damn you
i read that in flutershys voice
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Oh
I'm sorry, Mr E-Elijah... Its just that after i met Iron Will, i somethimes get carried away...
Please don't be mad at me...
This story is amazing. I detect a category 8 shitstorm.
1564536 And It's name is Derpy Hooves.
I'm not kidding, Derpy literally was the storm that breezed on in with all it's shit.
Garnny Smith was really unexpected. I wonder why she got so mad.
As for the rest... Well I honestly have a bad feeling abuot this, since this is beggining to sound like "Warming up". Thank God this is not an "M" rated fanfic.
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