Spike has lived his whole life beside Twilight, but has had his true emotions shrouded by his shame. Will the universe bring these two souls closer, or are they to be forever damned to the despair of solitude?
1518011 I prefer not to think too much ahead so I don't spoil anything for myself, no matter how much or little obvious it is... If that makes sense Still, ayness for more soon
1518047 So THAT'S where my bomb went off to...knew I should have never trusted Luna with it, damn. Also, HA! Those bastards got what they deserved and you got to love Spike he's such a smart ass, one of my favorites really....hmmm...not sure why there is a big gap towards the last line and end of the chapter but whatever. Remember they are only five, maybe six years apart not a big deal at all
1518989 We have got to STOP meeting like this bro. Nah, I'm kidding, we both seriously love Spilight so it's only natural that we would both read and comment on such a very well made story right? Go get Reaper, 27, see if he'll like this
Also, mind adding a bit of Derpy Hooves to this as well?
1519176 Hmmmm.....nah, your good bro, I don't think many would care about it to be honest, also welcome to the Spilight Army, I'm your second in command and as soon as I find the #1 fan of Spilight I'll be sure to intoduce him/her to you...once I meet them myself
Maybe you should stop giving us both Spikes' reactions to his memories. Memories don't work like that. I'm don't know jack about psychology, but it seems pretty obvious that when your mind is busy recovering a lost memory, it's a little to occupied to let you stop and have an emotional reaction to it. Memories don't work like movies in that regard, where you can draw an opinion while your past-self is some kind of detached avatar. Also, having the thoughts and emotions of two Spikes described at the same time is confusing and more than a little annoying. Describe the memory, then save his present reactions for when he wakes up and is capable of mulling it over.
Now, I am eager for some tense drama to take place between Spike and Twilight, and for it to be followed by their first make-out scene, clop scene, what have you.
Very well, dear reader, I plan on approaching Spike's upcoming memories in a new method anyway, but for the dream sequences I'll put your advice into effect.
1519404 Same here brother, same here An evil laugh, how come no one told me? Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahah........ Hoping he likes this, though I think he is one for Spilight...the best pairing ever created for MLP (in my own eyes)
1519761 I like any pairing save for Spike/Rarity, Twilight/Big Macintosh, Celestia, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash...other then that I can handle any and alomst every pairing created But that's just my opition, I would never judge those who like the pairings I dislike, no need to, everyone has their own choices correct?
1519765 Brohoof, always and forever it is Do you like any other pairing besides Spilight as well, fellow Brony?
Of course I do, I don't like to judge other people because of their likes or dislikes, heck, there are even stories of pairings I like that make me want to pummel my laptop out of existence.
1519801 I can completely agree with that, of which pairings do you mean that would make you wish to end your computer early?
1519812 Are you talking about the five I really hate? Or the ones I really enjoy because I love a LOT of them....and yes I do...now and forever, but if we can be ok with those that like Spike/Rarity *vomits* or those that make Spike and Twilight mother and son *shivers* then why can't they accept us liking Spike/Twilight as romantic partners? I mean of course, there will always be people that are very, very vocal about their choices but can't they accept others for what they enjoy as well? We are MLP fans for a reason, right?
The buck was the question again? Anyway ummmmmmmm..........................ALL HAIL DERPY HOOVES!
1520137 scratch that... rewind, what i MEANT to say is i have the same opinion, except i like sparity, and celestia. i totally derped there... i am a bucking idiot...
twispike is AWESOME! and yes we have reasons for liking mlp...
Man you works fast, don't you. Nice chapter. That's pretty much all I can say about this. Well that, and that I can't really see why would Spike block that memory if nothing really bad happened. But then again, he doesn't realy know what's going on to him or his memory.
As the mental disorder book suggested, Spike is blocking off all memories even related to the traumatic experience. This includes anything relating to his affections towards Twilight and any encounters with the three aggressors.
This could get dangerous, a person that has shut off memories to traumatic to visit may inadvertently regress (which is to say) get beilligerent if they are forced to face the problem, comflicting realities would set in emotions would be brought up and shit would go down. Who else wants to watch this ship wreck in waiting. Anyone... Anypony at all.
I find it highly unlikely that anyone would be foolish enough to bully a personal student of the immortal goddess able to control the sun itself and the ruler of the whole Equestria, unless they had a deathwish
Two things. One, if this were a filly Twilight before her cutie mark, I could understand some teenagers giving her problems magic wise. But this is teenage!Twilight we're talking about. You know, the pony who can create magical forcefields strong enough to stop the physical incarnation of entropy himself, more powerful than their god-empress, while levitating herself and five other ponies at the same time? As in, stopping the most powerful magic in the pony universe while casting another spell around herself and five others. And a paparazzi-member-to-be is a threat to this unicorn how? Secondly, God does not exist in the ponyverse. He is not a thing known to ponies, who assume Luna and Celestia as their deity-rulers. You could say "Oh my Celestia" but Twilight doesn't seem like the type to be that careless with her personal possesives regarding a pony she knows and loves/has a crush on/views as a mother figure/all three, so "Oh Celestia" works best.
Here you go, dear readers, have a extra long chapter as a 'thank you' for your audience.
I like the premise, it's familiar but has its own twist on things.
It was a good read.
-Sturrn
Now to wait to see what the Princess needs
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Hello there, dear reader, I am going to go ahead and say that the plot is thicker than it seems, try seeing beyond the princess, and find the root of old and new problems, besides you won't have to wait, I'm working as we speak.
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1518011
I prefer not to think too much ahead so I don't spoil anything for myself, no matter how much or little obvious it is... If that makes sense
Still, ayness for more soon
1518028
Indeed...hmmm...YOU KNOW TOO MUCH!!!
*PRESSES SELF-DESTRUCTION BUTTON*
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1518047
Actually I know too little thanks to not thinking ahead
Now... That is a good thing, right? Right?
moar... i love twispike...
1518989
Don't worry, dear reader, MOAR is on its way and I won't stop until my brain looks like a crumpled up piece of paper.
1518999
Ah, it looks like I'v found my dear reader of the week.
I fucking love this.
Jus' sayin'. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png
1518047 So THAT'S where my bomb went off to...knew I should have never trusted Luna with it, damn. Also, HA! Those bastards got what they deserved and you got to love Spike he's such a smart ass, one of my favorites really....hmmm...not sure why there is a big gap towards the last line and end of the chapter but whatever. Remember they are only five, maybe six years apart not a big deal at all
1518989 We have got to STOP meeting like this bro. Nah, I'm kidding, we both seriously love Spilight so it's only natural that we would both read and comment on such a very well made story right? Go get Reaper, 27, see if he'll like this
Also, mind adding a bit of Derpy Hooves to this as well?
1519146
By a teenage filly, I meant around fourteen.
Probably should rephrase that right?
UPDATE:Chapter three 'Dream Walking' is halfway complete, dear readers, BASK IN THE TIME UNTIL I FINISH IT!!
1519176 Hmmmm.....nah, your good bro, I don't think many would care about it to be honest, also welcome to the Spilight Army, I'm your second in command and as soon as I find the #1 fan of Spilight I'll be sure to intoduce him/her to you...once I meet them myself
1519216
Glad to help, now tis be time for me to return to make Spike continue on his trippin' quest.
1519227 Same here and count me in Also, you ever need any help, ideas or advice, I got your back bro
Maybe you should stop giving us both Spikes' reactions to his memories. Memories don't work like that. I'm don't know jack about psychology, but it seems pretty obvious that when your mind is busy recovering a lost memory, it's a little to occupied to let you stop and have an emotional reaction to it. Memories don't work like movies in that regard, where you can draw an opinion while your past-self is some kind of detached avatar. Also, having the thoughts and emotions of two Spikes described at the same time is confusing and more than a little annoying. Describe the memory, then save his present reactions for when he wakes up and is capable of mulling it over.
Now, I am eager for some tense drama to take place between Spike and Twilight, and for it to be followed by their first make-out scene, clop scene, what have you.
1519330
Very well, dear reader, I plan on approaching Spike's upcoming memories in a new method anyway, but for the dream sequences I'll put your advice into effect.
1519146 i love meeting like this i will go get reaper!
1519404
Please do...MUAHAHAHA MORE SOULS FOR US!!!
1519433 the deed is done... Mwahahahahahahahahahahahaaaa
1519404 Same here brother, same here An evil laugh, how come no one told me? Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahah........ Hoping he likes this, though I think he is one for Spilight...the best pairing ever created for MLP (in my own eyes)
1519749 yes yes and all of my yes... i also like spitdash/dashfire
1519749
Because it is.
1519761 I like any pairing save for Spike/Rarity, Twilight/Big Macintosh, Celestia, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash...other then that I can handle any and alomst every pairing created But that's just my opition, I would never judge those who like the pairings I dislike, no need to, everyone has their own choices correct?
1519765 Brohoof, always and forever it is Do you like any other pairing besides Spilight as well, fellow Brony?
1519790
Of course I do, I don't like to judge other people because of their likes or dislikes, heck, there are even stories of pairings I like that make me want to pummel my laptop out of existence.
1519790 HOW ARE WE SO ALIKE?! I LIKE ALL OF THOSE!!!! and yes, that is correct, you read for the ones we love right?
hopefully twi and spike if they get together can prove rarity wrong about dragons and unicorns
1519801 I can completely agree with that, of which pairings do you mean that would make you wish to end your computer early?
1519812 Are you talking about the five I really hate? Or the ones I really enjoy because I love a LOT of them....and yes I do...now and forever, but if we can be ok with those that like Spike/Rarity *vomits* or those that make Spike and Twilight mother and son *shivers* then why can't they accept us liking Spike/Twilight as romantic partners? I mean of course, there will always be people that are very, very vocal about their choices but can't they accept others for what they enjoy as well? We are MLP fans for a reason, right?
The buck was the question again? Anyway ummmmmmmm..........................ALL HAIL DERPY HOOVES!
1520137 scratch that... rewind, what i MEANT to say is i have the same opinion, except i like sparity, and celestia. i totally derped there... i am a bucking idiot...
twispike is AWESOME! and yes we have reasons for liking mlp...
1520137
Basically anything with this guy-
Damn it my laptop broke, the fourth chapter will be postponed until later today, or tommorow at latest
Man you works fast, don't you.
Nice chapter. That's pretty much all I can say about this. Well that, and that I can't really see why would Spike block that memory if nothing really bad happened. But then again, he doesn't realy know what's going on to him or his memory.
1523101
As the mental disorder book suggested, Spike is blocking off all memories even related to the traumatic experience. This includes anything relating to his affections towards Twilight and any encounters with the three aggressors.
Cliffhangers... Cliffhangers everywhere!!!!!!!
This could get dangerous, a person that has shut off memories to traumatic to visit may inadvertently regress (which is to say) get beilligerent if they are forced to face the problem, comflicting realities would set in emotions would be brought up and shit would go down. Who else wants to watch this ship wreck in waiting. Anyone... Anypony at all.
This is the first time I've ever read twispike, and I FUCKING LOVE IT!
But what if Celestia wiped Spikes memories because she thought pony x dragon is wrong?
And what if Twilight has been crushing on Spike all these years since he saved her, but she was forbidden to act upon this by the princess?
Oh my, TOMKINS! A glass of water please, my head hurts and Im starting to think people actually care about my opinions. What a terrible delusion!
I find it highly unlikely that anyone would be foolish enough to bully a personal student of the immortal goddess able to control the sun itself and the ruler of the whole Equestria, unless they had a deathwish
Two things. One, if this were a filly Twilight before her cutie mark, I could understand some teenagers giving her problems magic wise. But this is teenage!Twilight we're talking about. You know, the pony who can create magical forcefields strong enough to stop the physical incarnation of entropy himself, more powerful than their god-empress, while levitating herself and five other ponies at the same time? As in, stopping the most powerful magic in the pony universe while casting another spell around herself and five others. And a paparazzi-member-to-be is a threat to this unicorn how? Secondly, God does not exist in the ponyverse. He is not a thing known to ponies, who assume Luna and Celestia as their deity-rulers. You could say "Oh my Celestia" but Twilight doesn't seem like the type to be that careless with her personal possesives regarding a pony she knows and loves/has a crush on/views as a mother figure/all three, so "Oh Celestia" works best.
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