I like ponies and electronic music. I also like to read. Enough said.
Twilight wakes up in a mysterious swamp, her magic not working. She is found by a teenage human who takes her in. With her magic reduced to the very basic levitation, she is stuck there for a while. How will she adjust her new surroundings? Will she ever get home?
This is my first fan-fic. Please, leave any helpful criticism down below!
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Could use a formatting pass, but overall, not bad. Paragraphs need to be indented. A space between them would help, but isn't strictly speaking necessary. You have my attention for the time being.
This looks interesting... Added to the read later list
COME BACK FOOD!
I like it so far
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I enjoy making people laugh, glad you enjoyed it!
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Help appreciated! Have a 'stache!
It's a good story line. Although, there are a couple of typos like a small word that you missed when typing (i.e. the, and, to, in)
It's funny. I am writing my first fan fic, but yours is a completely opposite plot line.
Anyways, keep writing. It looks great.
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Thanks, I can use all the help I can get, this being the first fan-fic I've ever written. Have a chicken.
1516194 Thanks for the chicken.
But I'd be more satisfied if you'd rate me on my fan-fic.
I'll give this fic a chance so far, I'm curious on where it goes so consider this story being watched
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You sexy beast.