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The Factory

Rainbow Dash faints one fateful day of working in the Rainbow Factory, but the question remains: Who is insane enough to take her job?

Chapters (3)

Chapter 1 · 10th Oct 2012 · 611 words
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Chapter 2 · 23rd Oct 2012 · 1,055 words
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Chapter 3 · 31st Oct 2012 · 753 words
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Critical Lighthouse

Critical Lighthouse #1 · Oct 24th, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

First thumbs up mate.

Arkenai

Arkenai #2 · Oct 24th, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Another thumbs up, I think.

You need more spaces in between paragraphs. I'd guess that you word processed this with Microsoft Word and copy pasted. It's fine to do that, but remember that every time you push the enter key, you should push it again.

I'd be interested in seeing what happened with RD.