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There's this game called Creeper World 2 and at the end of the story, it cuts off with one of the main characters leaving with another person that had helped the human race defeat the creeper, to go to what I think is another universe and I just came up with this story with them traveling to the pony universe.
They face a blue goo menace called "Creeper" that seeks to destroy everything all life has created.
I may be able to get part two up soon, but school starts in less than a week, but I have 45 minutes of free time at school so I may be able to finish this story in maybe a month or two
I'd put up a cover image, but it's copyright of the game creator, sorry
If you've played both Creeper World one and Creeper World 2, you should have a better understanding of whats going on, I'm not asking you to buy and play the game though and you don't need to have played both games to know wants going on.
Also, I'm only in Middle school so give me a break if the Writing isn't that good

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I proofread this over and over again, you should find no spelling errors or grammar errors.
However, you could give me suggestions on how I could improve this story and for people who have played Creeper world and Creeper World 2 can give me ideas on what to write next.

<No Universe is Safe From the Creeper>
"SWEET JESUS!!!1ONE!!"
<They face a blue goo menace called "Creeper">
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Interesting concept! Being familiar with the game you're referencing (NOT Minecraft, folks!), I'll take a look at this one in the morning. :)

Nice way to use the Elements of Harmony with the anti-creeper, simple and strait to the point.

As for ideas, perhaps introduce the... Phantoms was the name for the flying creeper right? And perhaps dragons as a minimal version of the Thor.
If your talking about story ideas, not much help there I fear.

95903
in the first one it was spores, in the second they were called phantoms, I'll be sure to include something about them and how they're a nuisance to the pegasi in part two
However, I still don't know how the creeper will react to spike's breath though.
I also have some ideas of the group traveling to the dark and alternate reality that originally corrupted the creeper and I'll throw discord into that!

95945 I'm not sure how Spike's breath would work. Only thing that comes to mind from the game is that it somehow has to do with the worm holes used to warp stuff between two points, as he used it for letters on the show.

Also, could you guys gie me feedback on how well written this is? I want to know if my writing is any good or not.

To all viewers: this is the game he is crossing: http://knucklecracker.com/creeperworld/web/play.php

95796
Look up Creeper World by Kuckle Cracker. :P

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