As Bolt a college student struggles to keep his life between being a geek and being a popular kid. As the trials for the equestria games is on the horizon his emotions seems to get out of control and struggles with his feelings of his old high school crush. (This my ocs not characters in show) There is a lot of characters to take note of
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There are several new characters (OC) that are described in the story, but since there are several of them, it is preferable to have them on their own character sheet. In other words, create a character sheet to describe that.
Another point is the amount of data you enter (a lot of numbers). Those parts where you just put the age... that helps but it feels a bit heavy when reading it. I think the character sheet would help fix it.
For the rest I think it's fine. The truth is I'm not an expert in romantic stories so I don't feel familiar with these types of stories. Parties and stuff... but you can see that there are several chill moments in history.