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What is this a crossover of?
oh, uh, ok? Their original human name is gone? I pray you're also not gonna go down the route where the mc suddenly acts like the character and loses their personality.
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No, I'm not doing that route. It's literally just shoving a character in and it's terrible in my opinion. The mc will forget his original name though, simply because of passing time.
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Highschool DxD an anime that's awesome in my opinion.
This felt quick but I'm guessing that it'll slow down for us to know more about the Main Character. So I'll keep an eye on this for now and see where it's going.
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I just set it up quickly so that the character she becomes makes sense. My main concern is usually char development. Wanted her anger and rage to have purpose.
*sees “should of” in the story blurb*
Uh, you do realize a mistake like that there of all places is going to keep a lot of people from reading any further, right?
*sigh* Another stupid Celestia, I hope she somehow learned to consider multiple options instead of attacking first possibility during the time skip at least.
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I thank you for your advice and no I didn't that would give off that energy. I'm not the greatest when it comes to short and long descriptions without giving too much info.
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It’s probably not as bad as it used to be when there were so many stories pouring in every day that no one could read them all, but if you’ve gotta do a blurb, try to make it technically perfect, because that’s the first thing anyone will see and they’ll be deciding based on it whether or not to look further.
This is going to be an interesting story
Dude this first chapter was good short but good hope to see more of and the development of your character😁😁😁
this was a good read, but I know it was just the Prologue but it was very shotgun paste , I do hope that the next chapter will take its time a bit more