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Warmth

Twilight has been getting little to no sleep. And pinkie pie knows this and decides to pay her a visit late at night

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Undead Whisperer 1 #1 · 3 weeks ago · · ·

A nice Twipie story, albeit with grammar mistake. May I recommend reading 'Writing guide by Ezn' to help improve your writing skill?

It was about 2:34 at Night, lunas moon

or maybe Twilight mind is more tired than I thought?

Twilight whispered to herself.

She goes to open the door to find a pink mare with drowsy tired eyes, looking concerned

But before Twilight can protest and tell Pinkie she was making things up, Pinkie shakes her head with a small smile and with a yawn

Before that though there was "her voice sounding Blane and annoyed", which i am unsure what to replace it with, plain?

Twilight says as gentle as she can, pinkies face instantly brightens up

“Yeah.. I think so to.."

You might have accidentally put a quotation mark in the next paragraph, where the missing quotation mark is,

all her worries and sadness all gone, like they were never there. The feeling of warmth filled Twilight as a small smile fell on her snout, as slumber came over her making her fall into dream land.

With respect, from a fellow Twipie.

_spicy_

_spicy_ #2 · 3 weeks ago · 1 · ·

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Thank you! I'm trying my best to write Correctly!

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