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College student, average gay pony enthusiast. I go by any pronouns! :}

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Twilight Sparkle, former Element of Magic, current Princess of Friendship for all of Equestria. Though perhaps a charmed life from the outside, she has regrets like any other pony. One memory in particular causes her to lament her thoughts to the moon one early dawn.

First person pov one-sided TwiPie fic. Rated Teen for themes of death and mourning.

Cover art made by Sparky45 (https://www.deviantart.com/sparkie45/art/Elemental-Wallpaper-Remix-by-Drago-Cheese-924045235).

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Comments ( 5 )

11850531
Thank you, sincerely ^^
I’m happy you enjoyed it

Even with all my studies, neither I nor Cadence could have had the will to raise the sun and moon as you and Celestia once did.

I still think of you when I look at them. I’m sure I always will.

Much like I will still think of her when the dawn turns the sky a rosy, brilliant, beautiful shade of pink.

You make it sound like Celestia and Luna are dead here. Did I miss something? Also, Twilight seems to be ignoring the fact that she raises the sun and moon every day and night. Not as long as Celestia and Luna did. But she's slowly catching up.

11850593
A very understandable confusion.
In this story, for all intents and purposes, they are not with Twilight physically. More specifically, I had this idea in my head of the two sisters ascending to become the sun and moon themselves, removing the need to magically raise and lower them.
I do realize I didn’t convey it very well, my apologies

Twilight did the right thing. Breaking up a relationship is not OK. As much as it hurts her, doing the opposite would have hurt others more.

Very good work!

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