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The Twilight Potion

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Elric of Melnipony

Elric of Melnipony #1 · February 13th · · 1 ·

I was curious about this story, but put off by the exposition dump right at the beginning. Sorry. Not voting up or down on it.

tailsopony

tailsopony #2 · February 17th · 1 · ·

Absolute bedlam. I enjoyed it.

Deparnieux

Deparnieux #3 · February 17th · 1 · ·

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Anything more specific to add? Sorry for the trouble but I'm new to the whole "everything" thing, and I'd really appreciate what I can improve on next time.

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And there I was, sitting right before publishing, debating whether or not I should have removed that bit. Guess I know the answer for next time. Thanks for the feedback!