Mass Effect - A Way Beyond

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FarObjective0

FarObjective0 #1 · February 18th · 1 · ·

I found one typo.

"made the rank ofLieutenant shortly before the Reaper Invasion"

Change ofLieutenant to of Lieutenant

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #2 · February 18th · · ·

Did you made a Mass Effect Crossover before?

Mkchief34

Mkchief34 #3 · February 18th · 1 · ·

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Yeah, this is the remaster.

Mkchief34

Mkchief34 #4 · February 18th · · ·

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Fixed.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #5 · February 18th · 1 · ·

P.S. Onto the story itself. Twilight SHOULDN'T keep revealing their world, along with the massive information about their pony kind and other non-pony races without permission, into the unknown of space without negative consequences.

She should feel lucky that the message was sent to a actual good galactic alliance, with a bunch of heroes like Shepherd and his Crew going there.

Instead of going into the wrong hands like Cerberus, another hostile species, or even the Reapers of all things knowing about Equis/Equestria first.

Then again, our species technically did the same thing with Voyager 1 leaving our Solar System long ago. But at least it was supervised and approved of.

Mkchief34