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Michael Spruce


Just a small-town pony with a few big ideas in my noggin.

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It's been two years since the war began in the north. Two years of being pushed back, kilometer by kilometer, across Equestrian soil. The nation runs short of ponies fit to lead her masses, and casts her net ever wider in search of bodies for the furnaces of war.

Summer Meadows, the youngest daughter of a venerable unicorn house, is pulled from her officer training early and sent to the front to be a tank commander. She is, of course, excited at the prospect of serving her country and her princess at last, but there is one small problem: she doesn't know the first thing about being a tanker...

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A tank crew ensemble story set in a world in which Equestria finds itself in a losing war with a power-hungry neighbor, using hardware loosely based on the Second World War. It combines two things I love: ponies and tanks, in a never-before-seen kind of pony war story.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 16 )

I noticed there aren’t many comments here but I just want to say that I love the work that you have put into this story and I cannot wait for future updates

this is honestly, amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter

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You are certainly in luck, then, because the next chapter is already up!

I'm uploading what I have written and polished at a rate of one chapter a day, you know, just to have some consistent exposure in "recently updated" category. This overarching "part" of the story comes in six chapters - it would have been three, but each chapter got to be a bit of a bite to chew at a time, and there were convenient scene breaks right in the middle I could use, so why not?

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Eyyy, new chapter. Pretty interesting the new guy.
I wish you luck with the other chapters

dang, another chapter

Gonna be entirely honest, I really didn't like Summer for most of this chapter (Except for the end though). Also, with the shear quality writing that this story has, I feel as though it is currently criminally underrated.

Gotta love how even though they're in a fight for survival, the Equestrians still continue to be racist towards one another.

Nice

Will say that it is rather interesting (And neat) to get to see Summer from the perspective of another one of her crew members.

You know, since my story is rated teen, I'm not sure if the bare implication of the deed, with absolutely no details, warrants the "sex" tag. Anyone more educated on the use of the tags and ratings than I am care to weigh in?

I would say that if you continue to reference it, you should probably add the "Sex" tag with a Teen rating and just leave a note in the description saying something like: "Sex tag is for innuendo featured occasionally throughout the story".

The extraction fan whirred in the relative silence, drawing out toxic fumes and cigarette smoke alike.

So just toxic fumes then?

I definitely was not expecting that to come out of Misty's backstory.

Supercharger defending Sterling Ranger's engine from those truck mechanics was honestly kind of adorable.

sweet chapter mate:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Her horn projected through a hole between the dual hatches Minty had persuaded one of the welder ponies to cut specifically for this purpose when Supercharger left the tank alone to deliver her "personal report". Not only did Summer not have to crane her neck so much anymore when she sat, but also, in Minty’s opinion, it was worth the look on Supercharger’s face when she returned to find the work already finished.

They probably should add something to the hatch to cover her horn, lest the tip get shot off in combat.

Tank no.7, as Minty had learned, had taken an armor-piercing shell through the front that had killed the commander and gunner outright, and wounded the loader so badly she died only minutes later. Now, the radio operator had taken over as commander, because only he and the driver knew anything about tank operations, and the driver was indispensable. He was trying his best, but he was definitely a weak link in the chain.

And this is why (In the US at least) every crew member of a tank is trained on all of the tank's positions, makes it easier to swap people around if crew members become incapacitated.


To answer your question Michael_Spruce, yes I did rather like the approach that you took for Minty's ark.

I liked it a lot. Thanks for writing!

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