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In this story, a group of misfits at school end up going into the MLP universe in Final Fantasy tactics advanced fashion. The characters in this story are not the exact same as the one's in FFTA, but they are very similar. Also the kids are in middle school in this tale, so the language is more akin to what they might actually say if this were real. While you dont necessarily have to have played FFTA to get the gist of this story, the general moral of the story and the intro are closely related to the game. Also this is my first shot at any fan fic, let alone a MLP semi-crossover fanfic, so constructive criticism will be appreciated. If this is given favorites/thumbs up, I will continue to write it whenever I get the chance. If not, I have some other great ideas.There may be a few spelling errors as well.

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Comments ( 9 )

inb4 fix grammar.

I love Final Fantasy Tatics Advance so you got a friend here :twilightsmile: best of luck and keep up the awesome work! :twilightsmile:

Thanks guys, Yeah, I probably should have spent some more time proofreading that for grammar and crap, for the next chapters, I'll get someone else to proofread. I am going to try to get the next chapter in by sometime next week, but school and work are definetly taking a toll on my free time. Really wish I had the time to write the next chapter:fluttercry:, but the first one just took too dang long to write, and once I get writing it is really hard to stop

Hmm an interesting concept, if one has played the game and knows the progression of the plot. I shall be looking forward since this HiE could have potential for showing off a different kind of actions a "typical" human would do (ie seeing what the main protagonist ultimately done at the end of the game) . Format could use more work as Grammar could use more polished, but don't let that discourage you.

This fanfic has a potential for what it is, and hoped you got it laid on your mind. Keep up the good work man, best regards:eeyup:

alright, just got the 1st real chapter in, probably going to be a while till the next one comes in, just too much on my plate right now. Sorry the beggining part was a bit slow, I'll try to work on that for future updates. Oh, and if anybody wants a clan name, post it in the comments section, whichever is the most popular will win (I guess). The clan name at the end was more or less a joke.:pinkiegasp:

I am realy starting to like this ...dispite feeling abit left surprised how fast it went... :twilightsmile: but thats nether here nor there! How about the.... Clan Wildcard they have a mouth offing Unicorn a Insane Pinkiepie (registers as her own race) a Tomboy Le-...i mean uhh Nicelady and A fationistia a Timeline obsesssed Unicorn and a workaholic... and a Animal Tamer who will likly run from her foes and let a little bunny fight...Pretty much WildCards :pinkiesmile:

Hmm, it needs more formatting and polishing, the chapter had a fast pacing into it which would kind of break the reader away from the story. A paragraph break in between dialogue will help readers understand conversation better, as well as stating who or who doesn't entered said conversation. other then that its an alright chapter. Hope this helps, best regards. :eeyup:

Awesome. I still have my copy of FFTA! keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

Added to read later. I loved the game, I got to where the pink/red haired girl shows up in the FF world and then lost my save. Def gonna read this, is there spoilers for the game?

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