Following the event of Mirror Magic, Starlight Glimmer went back to Equestria. Much to Sunset's surprise, she soon came back as a transfer student at Canterlot High. But there seemed to be something odd about her friend. It was like she was a completely different person from the one she met...
A story about what human Starlight Glimmer is up to in her world.
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EQG Starlight has definitely had a few traumatic experiences by the way she acts. Superb start!
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thank you for the feedback! ^^
I don't have much to say about this story so far. It's a good start, and I imagine you could probably do something really good with this, but it doesn't have much meat to it yet beyond just the basic premise. You do have a bit of a hook in there, but I think it might have been better if you'd written a little bit more and gone a bit further to get the reader's attention. Barring a few minor mechanical errors, this was pretty decent overall. I wish you luck if you decide to write more of this!
I'm kinda hoping that Sunset and Starlight end up in a street fight
Awesome meeting of Trix and Star. There certainly is something interesting about her indeed!