A soft, warm feeling enveloped rainbow dash as she stared up, a figure of all light colours stood over her, speaking soft words she couldn't make out, then a pressure on her forehead, the figure retreated, rainbow dash tried to raise a hoof, to call out for the figure to stop but it was too late.
This dream leads rainbow dash to uncover a truth that upends everything she thought she knew about herself
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Huh I wonder what Luna will say once she finds out.
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Oh she'll have a few words for her dear sister
Love the story, but Rainbow Dash would have reacted differently to knowing she was an alicorn. Also she wouldn't want to be pink so she must have said something about that. Plus, there were many grammatical issues. For starters, make the first letter of a name capital. You just wrote Rainbow as rainbow and Twilight as twilight. THE STORY WAS AMAZING!!!
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Thanks for the feedback, I'm not the best with remembering capitalisation, so apologies if that turns you away from the fic, as for rainbows colouring, wether she'd like it or not is irrelevant, i chose a colour that was somewhat associated with celestias colouring for rainbows coat colour, and it's not just learning she's an alicorn, but that so much of what she thought she knew about herself, like her parents, wasn't true, it's a matter of too much on her plate, coat colour wouldn't be high on her priority list
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Oh boy
So when Luna going to find out
Ohh honestly Rainbow would make an interesting alicorn.
Now it just needs to be revealed that Pinkie is one too and that’s how she does all the craziness. Or maybe another draconequis..
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While that WOULD be crazy i will tell you i have no plans at this time to unveil that any other ponies are alicorns sans flurry heart when she's born