Twilight’s Doppelgänger

Twilight Sparkle completed Starswirl’s spell and cemented her destiny as the next princess of Equestria. Yet, one day her doppelgänger appears in a horrible state. How will her future change? Will she even still want to be a princess?

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Chapter 1 · 20th Oct 2023 · 3,968 words
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Chapter 2 · 11th Nov 2023 · 1,214 words
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Chapter 3 · 17th Nov 2023 · 1,662 words
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Interlude - Luna · 17th Nov 2023 · 801 words
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GlitchyFox

GlitchyFox #1 · Oct 23rd, 2023 · 1 · 1 · Chapter 1 ·

looking forward to seeing where this goes. maby celestia is a clone herself and the original celestia became chrisalis and lost her memorys

Adamastos

Adamastos #2 · Oct 25th, 2023 · · · Chapter 1 ·

This shows promise of being interesting and having Celestia face the consequences of her actions.

Poparakelis

Poparakelis #3 · Nov 11th, 2023 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Twilight adjusted her regalia and triple, no, QUADRUPLE checked she had everything ready for the her first official day as ruler. First impressions are everything, and she knew this would be what historians would write about in books about her in the future. “Are you ready Spike?” “Huh. You really have the ‘I’m totally not going to freak out for real’ thing down now.” “Har har, character development, I know,” she giggled. “Ahem, anyway... shall I bring the first pony in for court your highness?” “Still going to need to get used to you speaking like that. And yes, let’s begin.” Putting on her most stoic yet kind and friendly face, she opened her first day court. —————

Why the hell are those paragraphs glued?

GlitchyFox

GlitchyFox #4 · Nov 11th, 2023 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Celestia will hold onto that this was necessary and likely the only thing that would shake to destroy that excuse would be for original twilight to accend herself, maby it was fated that twilight would accend with her friends and rule together and celestia doomed Equestria through her meddling

Aiwhisper

Aiwhisper #5 · Nov 11th, 2023 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Interesting.

Second Chance

Second Chance #6 · Nov 11th, 2023 · · · Chapter 1 ·

“So wait, how have you been away this whole time when we just saw you like, a few days ago? Time travel?” “No, Dash. I really have been traveling from across the world to come back here. I don’t even remember any of the stuff about becoming a princess or ruling Equestria. It’s like you’ve known a different pony this whole time...” “Oh yeah, so how do we know YOU aren’t a fake Twilight then?” Rainbow pointed at her accusingly. “Can it, Dash she’s tellin’ the truth. I can tell.” Having recovered from her fainting spell, Fluttershy stepped forward. “Do you think Twilight used a spell to make a copy of herself? Is that possible?” Fluttershy looked at Rarity, who shrugged at this. Twilight looked away in thought at the question, for it may just be close to the answer. “Hmmm like the mirror pool?” Pinkie suggested. “Definitely not that. The last time I was with you all, I had fixed your destinies back to what they should be. Then I completed Starswirl’s spell. Perhaps that somehow caused two versions of myself to manifest... I just don’t know how. The spell had to do with destiny... destiny...” Her eyes widened in realization. If she were right, it would turn everyone’s lives upside down, and perhaps all of Equestria! She grimaced at the thought, let alone saying it out loud.

It's that why messing with Time and Destiny is not good idea

Second Chance

Second Chance #7 · Nov 12th, 2023 · · · Chapter 1 ·

That is quite complicated, I feel Angry for Celestia to send her in few places to suffer until Feeling satisfied to look hrr with more Control blood lust

Second Chance

Second Chance #8 · Nov 12th, 2023 · · · Chapter 2 ·

“Celestia, Luna, there’s a lot that needs to be explained tonight. Do you mind if we come in?” Celestia beamed, “Of course, Twilight. You are always welcome here.” Her mane almost rippled back more fervently as she replied. Luna nodded her approval and shut the door behind them. “Would you like some tea?” Celestia chirped. “No thank you. Just want to talk. It’s important.” Luna and Celestia both gave concerned looks. “Trouble in court? I know the feeling.” Luna remembered her day of switching roles with Celestia after Starlight Glimmer’s spell. “No, nothing like that. I just have a few questions.” Celestia looked at the stranger to Twilight’s right. She thought it may have something to do with them, her instincts were rarely wrong. “Take a seat. And your friend…?” Celestia looked curiously at the cloaked figure. “She is a bit shy and doesn’t want to reveal herself at the moment. Give her time.”

It's ghost of the Future past

Second Chance

Second Chance #9 · Nov 12th, 2023 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Sunset Shimmer did it way better than Twilight and modernised Equesia

Tails maybe Would be great at ruling Equesia

Nine had a bad life and knows what was to be bullied getting the short stick who Tails fould Someone to raise him.

Maybe Nine Would be great ruler

Celestia got me Dissapointed, and angry to send her in hell until calming down

Adamastos

Adamastos #10 · Nov 14th, 2023 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Excellent chapter. I did like how Luna is left seriously questioning Celestia now. Will there be a trial? Two Twilights couldn't be kept secret.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #11 · Nov 17th, 2023 · · · Chapter 3 ·

What episode is the cover art from?

Adamastos

Adamastos #12 · Nov 17th, 2023 · · · Chapter 3 ·

Eh, this suddenly feels like one of the bad episodes from the show, where the writing dropped the seriousness & logic. To me it feels like this chapter doesn't fit well with the previous two chapters.

black_arachnia

black_arachnia #13 · Nov 17th, 2023 · · · Chapter 3 ·

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The episode where Twilight is annoyed by Pinkie not making sense in season 1. I think the title is feeling pinkie keen.

black_arachnia

black_arachnia #14 · Nov 17th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 3 ·

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There will be more serious moments down the road, this is somewhat of a breather from that. We will get back to Celestia, Luna, and Twily/Twilight stuff too, so don’t worry.

vectorVll

vectorVll #15 · Nov 17th, 2023 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Are we really surprised Celestia would do something like this other than her track record of always being correct at the end of the day. See quite literally sent her sister to the moon using a magical spell that she had no idea what it would do to her. One of the things I can appreciate about Celestia she will make a hard decision.

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