Twilight Sparkle completed Starswirl’s spell and cemented her destiny as the next princess of Equestria. Yet, one day her doppelgänger appears in a horrible state. How will her future change? Will she even still want to be a princess?
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Twilight Sparkle completed Starswirl’s spell and cemented her destiny as the next princess of Equestria. Yet, one day her doppelgänger appears in a horrible state. How will her future change? Will she even still want to be a princess?
looking forward to seeing where this goes. maby celestia is a clone herself and the original celestia became chrisalis and lost her memorys
This shows promise of being interesting and having Celestia face the consequences of her actions.
Why the hell are those paragraphs glued?
Celestia will hold onto that this was necessary and likely the only thing that would shake to destroy that excuse would be for original twilight to accend herself, maby it was fated that twilight would accend with her friends and rule together and celestia doomed Equestria through her meddling
Interesting.
It's that why messing with Time and Destiny is not good idea
That is quite complicated, I feel Angry for Celestia to send her in few places to suffer until Feeling satisfied to look hrr with more Control blood lust
It's ghost of the Future past
Sunset Shimmer did it way better than Twilight and modernised Equesia
Tails maybe Would be great at ruling Equesia
Nine had a bad life and knows what was to be bullied getting the short stick who Tails fould Someone to raise him.
Maybe Nine Would be great ruler
Celestia got me Dissapointed, and angry to send her in hell until calming down
Excellent chapter. I did like how Luna is left seriously questioning Celestia now. Will there be a trial? Two Twilights couldn't be kept secret.
What episode is the cover art from?
Eh, this suddenly feels like one of the bad episodes from the show, where the writing dropped the seriousness & logic. To me it feels like this chapter doesn't fit well with the previous two chapters.
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The episode where Twilight is annoyed by Pinkie not making sense in season 1. I think the title is feeling pinkie keen.
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There will be more serious moments down the road, this is somewhat of a breather from that. We will get back to Celestia, Luna, and Twily/Twilight stuff too, so don’t worry.
Are we really surprised Celestia would do something like this other than her track record of always being correct at the end of the day. See quite literally sent her sister to the moon using a magical spell that she had no idea what it would do to her. One of the things I can appreciate about Celestia she will make a hard decision.
I don't know what to say. This is brilliant!
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Turn Celestia to stone. (its been coming for a while)
Monk
“Trust in your superiors. And soon enough, you will get what you deserve..." -JNKing
One criticism I would have is the formatting, the way different characters speech is bunched together makes it hard to read.
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Nope,
Ive always considered Celestia profoundly evil.
Monk
"Yes, I will eat the Fear Turkey." -Illua
I hope we get a side story of Luna trying (and failing) to do odd jobs.
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ВWhy you want Luna to fail in her tries
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Heck that should be a story all it’s own as a spin-off instead of filling chapters in this story.