ULTRAKILL x Fall Of Equestria: Parasites

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #1 · Sep 17th, 2023 · 2 · · Prelude ·

You had me very intrigued for being the first Ultrakill crossover.

But I have one question? Why is a archangel helping the Caribou? Aren't they disgustingly infamous for their mess-up "actions" in the Fall of Equestia fanstories?

Not to mention on why attacking the very peaceful equestrian ponies?

DrCygnus

DrCygnus #2 · Sep 17th, 2023 · 2 · 3 · Prelude ·

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firstly yay an Ultrakill FiMFiction
second JESUS CHRIST those are some INcredibly Discouraging Solid Walls of Text

Big boi

Big boi #3 · Sep 18th, 2023 · 2 · · Prelude ·

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Not bad so far, spelling mistakes here and there but otherwise good.

Fox Jones

Fox Jones #4 · Sep 18th, 2023 · 1 · · Prelude ·

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Well, that is a pretty good start! Watch a bit closer for the spelling and grammar, but otherwise, I love it!

Dragoknight92

Dragoknight92 #5 · Sep 18th, 2023 · 1 · · Prelude ·

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I agree with ya.

Artich

Artich #6 · Sep 18th, 2023 · 1 · · Prelude ·

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I agree, kinda scary.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #7 · Sep 19th, 2023 · · · 0-1: Ultimativ Kriger ·

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*Dainn became excited at just the word, turning away from the angel to hide his devilish grin “Canterlot you say? Hehehehe” he laughed “You planning on starting a war with all of Equestria over this crusade?” Uriel nodded under his red cloak “It is my divine duty to spread the word of my holy teachings to as many nonbelievers as possible Prince. The time we move on from these minuscule towns and begin to truly expand the practices of faith is nigh. The chosen people will greatly benefit from this as well”

Oh, that explains a lot. All of this is "justified" through a "Holy" Crusade!!??

I have half a mind to see our pony princesses and the Element Bearers be extremely pissed at this "holy" angel being on of the "main causes" for the Caribou's Invasion.

And call out for his total hypocrisy for the very unholy bloodshed and destruction on both their kingdom, citizens, specifically against the women/mares/children, and the other innocent species as well, that sadly got caught in the crossfire.

No better or similar to the Storm King and his conquests.

“Unlike everyone else here I know the ponies are not to be underestimated” he unsheathed his blade from its scabbard to glance at its craftsmanship “They have managed quite a reputation. I heard they managed to defeat both the Storm King and the great Tirek! How could I not find them fascinating! In fact my lord I even envy them.” His smile now aimed directly at Uriel. “I would perform unspeakable acts at the chance to engage those two in battle… I will gladly take part in this upcoming battle. History is going to remember this one.”

"Unspeakable Acts"!?

And as for Tirek and the Storm King?

Tirek, maybe? Don't know how to heck you're going to face him when Tirek goes to his gigantic forms!?

BUT the Storm King is actually a total wimp and a liar. His own soldiers do the dirty work like Tempest Shadow, and he almost does nothing.

“Why do you care about the work of lesser beings Prince”

“Why bother with the tool of a mortal Prince? You know I can offer you holy weapons far beyond what these lowly beings can craft.”

Oh. That explains his "attitude", despite being a "Holy" Angel. I'm actually glad V1 is going to target him next.

Dane sheathed the blade back into the scabbard
“Because there was a warrior I wish to respect”

Okay, is he really Dainn, or "Dane"? Because you really need to fix his name and spelling?

And just wait until Dainn meets V1!!!

V1 is unlike any warrior Dainn has ever faced.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #8 · Sep 19th, 2023 · · · 0-1: Ultimativ Kriger ·

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So, what do I feel about this "new" Dainn in this story?

While I'm quite surprised and happy that he ISN'T like his original major sexist/misogynistic against women/mares, and a extreme rapist tyrant/conquer personality.

BUT, he still is a bloody conquer that still attacks various different villages, towns, and kingdoms of other species. And now Ponykind is next, because the "holy" angel said so.

Not to mention that he still feels indifferent with the women/mares poor plight as slaves anyway. At least he doesn't rape them himself.

And even then, the other Caribou Males are still they're disgusting sexist/rapist selves.

At least Dainn, keeps them in a leash. Barely.

So now, he acts like a battle/warrior addict?

Like he is a total cliche anime/manga warrior
and fighter like the Saiyans in general, Jiren, or Yujiro Hanma that adores a "very good fight", Strength, and stuff like that.

CrownClown74

CrownClown74 #9 · Sep 19th, 2023 · · · 0-1: Ultimativ Kriger ·

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Spelling mistake on my part from writing this at like 3 in the morning. I forgot the correct spelling so i went to fix it but i missed some, they are fixed now.

Anyway yes my interpretation of Dainn isn't really like the character normally is. I wanted to do something different other than making yet another anti Fall Of Equestria power wank fantasy where Dainn is the most evil person ever getting beat up by the hero. He is inspired by Vergil from the Devil May Cry series, Zenos yae Galvus from Final Fantasy, and V.I Freud from Armored Core 6. He is a bit of a generic fighter now I suppose yes but I have plans for that anyway. At the end of the day he’s still a hedonist only out for his own pleasures and getting his adrenaline and dopamine fix.

Fox Jones