A writer who loves Sunset Shimmer (who could have guessed XD), Rarijack, most MLP stuff in general. Bring back EQG! "My Past Is Not Today" - Sunset Shimmer
Set right after "Driving Miss Shimmer", Cranky Doodle has to drive Sunset home to deal with a technicality. Bonding ensues.
Trigger Warnings: Heavy Angst towards the end, depression, depressive thoughts, mentions of abusive parents and death, scarring on a back (not graphic description), car crashes (not sure if that's a big trigger but not taking any chances)
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please remove that, it has no place there.
I don’t think I’ve ever read a fic with Cranky. Ever. Let alone Human Cranky. Somehow these two complement each other well, what with their differing personalities.
Very glad I happened upon this fic. Thoroughly enjoyed it. I approve.
I haven't seen much of Cranky in other fics, but I absolutely love the way you wrote him and the interactions with Sunset Shimmer. Just an excellent story, all around.
Great story so far just one slight complaint I have is your use of quotes for the dialogue you're using (') when it should be (") I wouldn't normally point it out I'm not the best at punctuation but when a single quote is behind punctuation this website text to speech says it and that's kind of annoying reading more of the story I now realized that those were meant to be thoughts in which case your punctuation is correct but there was a snipment that sounded like dialogue I don't know if it was supposed to be dialogue but that was what the confusion LED from
this is where my confusion stand from since cranky responded I I assume this is meant to be dialogue but the quotes are incorrect, like I said wouldn't say anything but this website text to speech feature built-in says single quotes if it's placed after a punctuation that's the only reason I noticed it