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Incandesca

Incandesca #1 · Aug 6th, 2023 · 2 · ·

I wouldn't worry at all about any issues you think this had. For my part, at least, this was a treat to read.

The setup was wonderful. While getting right down and dirty can be nice, I personally am a sucker for context.

And I'm with Twilight on the end there, lol. A good hard tagteam fucksession in her cunt woulda been splendid. But I didn't ask for that, and the cuck vibes are rather funny anyhow.

Only feedback I'd give would be using the in-built

function for line breaks, and reviewing for typos.

Everything else? Incredible. Thank you so much for the story. <3

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