Harmony in Order

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BlueRiddle

BlueRiddle #1 · Jul 21st, 2023 · 3 · ·

I like this. I like how the mistress is evil, but isn't a bitch and is genuinely likable. I like the softer kind of domination here (as soft as it can be to slap the cum outta the poor mare lol). The idea of a whole country being her toybox, down to the ponies' silly little brains, is very hot. And I like the writing, how she doms but in an encouraging sort of way!

Very cute.

SapphireSpark

SapphireSpark #2 · Jul 21st, 2023 · · ·

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Thank you!

Exuno

Exuno #3 · Jul 21st, 2023 · 3 · ·

I really, really liked this. You start strong with some OC exposition that's a tiny bit over the top and silly, but also feels like a genuine appreciation and affection for your own character; you have her demonstrate her extremely silliness, and then you bully her relentlessly. The pacing of jokes, dirty talk, and lewd action were nice and smooth — I love the use of short commands and affirmations to represent how horny and single minded both cuties (and the reader) are. And a nice ~~bad~~ eager and optimistic ending, with plenty of implications of more fun to come...

All in all, this is the kind of fun and self-indulgent that I think porn should strive to be, and I'm very thankful for you writing and sharing. <3

SapphireSpark