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Deltathewolf


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Reading through old chemistry texts, Twilight uncovers an old science paper detailing how to make a portal.
Using Chemicals. And electricity.

Needless to say, things don't work out quite as expected.

Originally written as a writing assignment for a chemistry class, I decided it would be good enough to be posted here just for laughs, so expect some out of character ponies, science, and a sliver of human self-insert.
Try to spot the clever uses of basic chemistry vocabulary while your at it!

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Comments ( 8 )

Great story! So much buildup and palpable tension, and then some random human appears and disappears. I really liked it so far, but did you have to end it so early?

I think this could use a second chapter.

“I AM DELTA, AND I AM THE-“
The ring burst open into light again, and sucked the man back into it, immediately closing after him.

Poor guy got to finish his sentence :fluttercry:

I posted a comment.

Wonderful read.
Whole time I was thinking of the XKCD t-shirt saying "Stand Back! I'm going to try science"

1353915

Ha, I wrote this in a matter of hours for a chemistry class.
This was just a one-shot, but if I can come up with something else, I'll post it.

1353963
Congratulations.

1356604
For Science!

-Delta-

1360966Thank you for congradulating me.

Who else read the description in GLaDoS's voice?

1360966
What kind of chemistry class lets you write fanfics???

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