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Taking place after the "Pinkie sense" episode on the first season, this Grimdark story shows how Twilight discovers an infinite number of realities, also knowing that she always lived on a cartoon show.
Nothing and nopony is real... Or maybe is it? It's up to Pinkie, Rarity and Maud to prove that, but they will find really creepy experiences through it.

Created/written by StarBomber_4
Created/co-written by JPGartist

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

Huh. Usually, it's Pinkie who knows all of this, not Twilight. So bonus points for doing something new :pinkiehappy:.

I'm interested in the story
But

Look Boulder, there are some probably millennial stones on the ground, would they be your ancestors?

How the stone to exists the ancestors?

The tense is a bit off, but other than that, good story.

11576418
tysm! yeah, there's barely any tension for now but i'll make it better!

11576186
thanks for the interest! i'll try making the plot even better on the next chapters, maybe it will delay a little bit but not very much i guess

also, yeah, that dialogue was more like a joke (i like making some comic relief sometimes) but well, maybe there actually exists some kind of "stone reproduction" in this world, or maybe maud was just crazy, let's leave this as a mystery LOL

11576164
oh, it's awesome someone pointing out that detail, i'm glad you enjoyed it! it means a lot =)

11576129
thanks a bunch for liking it! =)

Has history been forgotten?

11611498
more than a month and nothing yet, buuut nope! I'm still writing it (free time is tough here lately but next month I'll be more free probably)
also, thanks a lot for commenting about that! it inspires me even more

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