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Chaldea Stories


hi everyone. i'm looking for an editor for some stories i'm doing.

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It has been several years since Principal Celestia lost her wonderful family in a terrible accident that resulted in the disappearance of her only daughter. Several years of guilt and sadness took their toll on several of those closest to her, including her husband, but somehow she was able to overcome it. When a young girl forced her way into her office, begging to be enrolled, she thought it was just a cruel joke of the world, God or any force majeure. Especially when that girl turned out to be a tormented villain from another universe. But could Celestia's mistake be another girl's salvation?


(Because of the death tag, because there are going to be assassination attempts and supposed deaths.)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

I am enjoying the set up, love Principal Mom stories for Sunset aswell
Please keep it up

Please if you can make both Celestias meet and solve the dilema, and make Twilight help

While she was thinking about all that, she was thinking where she had made a mistake with Sunset Shimmer. He knew she was not his daughter but his love for the young girl who looked like his daughter, who was the spitting image of his daughter had clouded his judgment for a long time. For if he knew he did bad things without however.... She never got to break the law or call a public authority so she thought it was an age thing, more so remembering her sister and her Nightmare Moon phase. If she kept this up, not only could she end up in prison but she might disappear forever and go back to her " equine" world, so before she went on with her day she would first have to get ready for school.

look like celestia turn into male for a momment

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I am very sorry if it came across that way. English is not my mother tongue and I am practicing doing history on this site to improve my English writing.

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If I'm thinking about doing that, the only thing I don't know what to do is how to describe a DNA test with magic. I can't think of a good term or how to explain it.

Eldorado
Moderator

This story is written in script format, which isn't allowed on Fimfiction. You'll need to rewrite the story into a normal narrative format in order to resubmit it here.

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Ok. I'll do it later then, I'm busy at the moment. How many days do I have to do it?

Eldorado
Moderator

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I've already revoked the story. You can take as long as you like, then resubmit the story when you're done.

Well, they deleted my story. If anyone is willing to help me edit it, I would like a comment.

really good first chapter please update it ASAP

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