The formal fall dance has started to become chaotic, "Sunset Shimmer" when he thought he had achieved his goal. Portals begin to appear, so they reveal so many different worlds and times. Among them appears a temple being destroyed but; what no one expected is that some demon pillars come out.
The worlds are both from Equestria and Earth, so in order to solve it they must be in the past. Showing a possible timeline of the story.
What would have happened...? If the world of Equestria Girls was invaded by other worlds and time from other worlds. Celestia and company have to face these invaders.
hello to all the members of the group. i'm looking for an editor for some stories i'm doing. I'm new to the fimfiction community and I'm writing some stories. Some are crossover with the fate series and some other stories are just ideas. But I already have some ideas. I speak english and spanish, but mainly the last one. I'm willing to pass my work through google drive.
Oh, sweet Twilight
, The description alone needs help.
"The formal fall dance has become chaotic, Sunset Shimmer when she thought she had achieved her goal, portals begin to appear. They reveal so many different worlds and times. Among them appears a temple being destroyed. But what no one expected is that some demon pillars come out.
The worlds are both from Equestria and Earth, so in order to solve it, they must be in the past. Showing a possible timeline of the story.
What would have happened...? If the world of Equestria Girls was invaded by other worlds and time from other worlds. Celestia and company have to face these invaders."
There's what I could do. But the wording makes no sense. Is English not your first language? Because I frankly can't figure out what you're trying to say here.
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You are right. I originally published it in Spanish and translated it as best I could with the English I studied and a little translator. In fact that's why I put in the notes that I needed an editor, since English is not my mother tongue. And I am trying to publish it in English, because in Spanish it is not commented and not known at all. So I don't know how to advance the story.
I'm sorry that my English is not the best. But if you could help me it would be a great help.
Translated with DeepL
I know FGO
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Would you be interested in being my editor and pre-reader?
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Not sure about editor but perhaps a pre reader
Even got some ideas to help out