Equestria is ruled by three Alicorns: Celestia, Luna, and their brother Drake. The story follows Drake as he is banned and mostly focuses on his return to Canterlot to reveal the truth behind his banishment
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CrimsonBrony4812
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will u continue this story
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I do have plans to continue the story, but I do not have a solid plan yet
Seems a little bit too fast.
And did he upgrade the military at least or improve the royal guards training? Or do they still use spears
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I have some plans to make some stories that happen during the time of banishment. As far as the military is concerned, I haven't put thought to that. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll make sure to cover it in a future story
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hey happy to help. Butthe royal guard do need an upgrade
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The story I'm currently working on deals with the royal guards situation immediately and continues the story of my oc
You gotta find the "Enter" key, bro.
I use a phone. So, I don't think I have that ability as far as I know. I do know that the indention is probably inconsistent, but thanks anyway
Ah yes, drake and Josh displaced. Perfect.
I'm joking, I just couldn't help thinking about that scenario.
Celestia really shouldn't be kept in power, or even be "forgiven" so easily. She should be stripped of her royal power, and either be rightfully imprisoned or exiled from Equestria herself. See how she likes it!
Drake, you are such a dummy.
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I see your point about Celestia and understand it. Ultimately it would've been Drake's choice on wether he wanted to demote his own sister, and I didn't want my OC to be an eye for an eye character moving forward. As far as forgiving Celestia, I felt it would make her a better pony, than just banishing her and having her come back for revenge. Anyway, thanks for the comment and have a nice day.
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Then Twilight, her friends, and especially Luna will had a very hard time to "forgive" or to never trust her anymore.
And if Celestia wants stupid unjustified revenge. She will easily get her butt kicked by the elements, be imprisoned in stone, or thrown to the sun this time.
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I once again see your point, which in fact is a good point, but if revenge on Celestia is implemented, what's to stop her from having hard feelings towards them. I felt it was best for all to forget the whole incident and move forward. The story is about a family, and I want them to have a good relationship with one another. For me, moving past the whole banishment stuff, is best for Celestia, Drake, and Luna, so they can rebuild trust with one another
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Okay, nevermind.
Slight typo you wrote Have I warned the right for Luna and I to be your equals, my dear Celest but warned should be won.
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A taste of her own medicine would have been good for her. She caused all of this because she wanted the spotlight on her alone and refused to share. Maybe having a taste of what she put others through would teach her humility and that she can't have the spotlight 24/7.
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Thanks for pointing out the mistake of warned. As far as Celestia goes, what's the point of revenge, Celestia is Drake's sister, a family member. As for Celestia receiving the spotlight, the main six have the spotlight at this point. Although yes, Luna did receive the worst end of it. And, I have only been making stories about less than a month so, I understand that I will make mistakes. But I currently don't feel like changing the ending, unless you want me to make a chapter that goes through the revenge plan.
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I just think it would a good punishment for her to get a taste of what she put those 2 through for 1000 years. They don't have send her to the moon. But outside losing the throne she has lost nothing and Truthfully I don't get the feeling that she is even slightly sorry about her actions. Maybe a taste of what they went would help her understand how wrong her actions were. It not revenge it's punishment for her mistake. They can make it less than what they got if they wanted. Also the person In charge gets the lions share of spotlight so even if the girls are in the spotlight now Celestia was still getting plenty of attention.
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Thanks for your perspective, I don't think I ever saw it that way. Although I don't have any current plans moving on for this specific timeline, but I'll keep it mind.