Bumbaclot hears a strange noise outside, he's not sure what it is. Well, when he finds out, he ends up playing dentist with Derpy and the characters in question.
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Feefle, why are you still here?
I'd recommend using chapters. Some beautiful day the mods will disapprove of posting every single chapter as a completely new story and that's when the Banhammer will get swinging...
Your anger only fuels me my dear friends :)
1331548 I would recommend stopping "writing"
1331567 It is not anger, it is pity.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png
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Nah it's anger. If it's pity I pity those who take it so seriously lol
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Well, as soon as the Banhammer speaks...
And oh, I decided to read this.
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1331593 It's not even pity. It's just disgust. Why would you post this? WHY?
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Being disgusted is also taking it too seriously
1331670 I don't think you understand the meaning of the word. I don't think that's a surprise.
I see a pile of sh*t on the road. I'm disgusted by it. I'm just going to go around it and try to forget it, so I can enjoy my lunch.
To anybody who's reading this comment and about to post their own: don't. Just back away. Don't put your foot in this mess. I expect Feefle will end up sitting in it soon enough, and then our troubles will be over.
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You're taking a little story like it's a big deal, how pitiful
If you're trying to avoid it, you shouldn't be commenting here at all amirite?
1331719 I'm doing this for a laugh, actually. I don't take myself very seriously.
But I'm going to actually help you out, because even trollfics require skill, and I think you're struggling with this.
1. No good trollficcer would ever reveal he's a trollficcer. That you did indicates some insecurity about this--you're worried people won't realize how soundly they've been 'outwitted', so you immediately let it slip so you can be smug about it.
Let me give an example of a good trollfic: Spike Fights The Angle Bunny. This is a great trollfic--you can tell just by the title. The best part? I'm still not sure it's a trollfic. The author sounds very much serious. And that makes it hilarious.
But you just immediately give the game up. It morphs this from "hahaha this fic is so bad" to "wow this 'writer' is kind of a jerk".
2. You seem to think being able to annoy people requires cunning. It doesn't. You can annoy people by spamming them, or sending them viruses, or yelling in their ear all day. No, what you should be trying to do is annoy them in an original fashion. Spamming chapters with a cheesy stick figure cover? Intentionally bad stuff is dead simple, but what you have here isn't originally bad, and that's what makes people just sigh and shake their heads.
3. In closing, you have a lot to learn about trollfics. Your wish to feel clever is overcoming your wish to actually troll, and that means that you aren't annoying people in a clever fashion at all. You're basically annoying them by banging pans together--complete with the childish implication of such an act.
You can mock them for 'taking it seriously', but they really aren't. They see a bad fic, they comment on it. People do that for a lot of bad fics. People are taking you seriously, because you're seriously being a jackass.
Oh, and by the way--I never read the fic. I just read your posts. Those are what I'm critiquing here.
Also, quit posting the chapters individually. Yes, your story is bad, we get it. Seeing the funny cheesy title and bad grammar isn't really funny more than once.
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Now THIS is proof you're taking it wayyyy too seriously
Good show!
Good show?
Good show?
I say, chaps and chappettes, this silly scallywag seems to think he knows how to well troll! Bloody hell, gov'nor, the bally cad! Jolly good, if that silly ragamuffin thinks I'm the one dealing with a troublesome cur, I do believe he's not quite certain what's jolly well going on in this most spiffing thread! Good show, old sport!
I can't bloody believe you just jolly well thought to engage me in a most spiffing battle of british!
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Takes a story seriously, then thinks I am trolling. I am sad for the human race
I say, you bally cad, what jolly well joking! Do you truly seem to believe you can pass my most excellent inspection? Trolling is a simple matter, old bean, and I am a simple chap!
Now, be a good sir and, as they say, chilL tHe MOthErBUCk Out.
This is just jolly well spiffing! Thinking to challenge my britishness, you silly scoundrel! And then you bloody think to change the bally subject? Ha! Fortunately for you, I do have to depart from this quaint quacking, for there is little sense in filling a trollfic's tricky trap with this thick and thorough thrashing! Pardon me, gov'nor, but I must see myself away!
Good show, chap!
I SAY!
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Oh dear, for the one who wrote a fanfic on the comments page about a short story, you're asking somebody else to chill?
It's true what they say about bronies it seems. You exploded into complete autism when I wrote "Good show!"
I say! A fanfic on the comments page, good sir? Pip pip, cheerio!
I had meant to depart, but you have piqued my jolly interest!
Also like dude talking about autism like that is like hella offensive and shizzle.
I say, you say that fanfics are not something to take seriously, then you instruct a good sir to chill after writing a fanfic!
Most disorienting!
I SAY! I think we'd better hurry off to the fire department! I seem to have set a village ablaze with these most un-spiffing diseased blazes! G'day, mate!
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Hey you're the one who keeps posting here after stating to everyone they should ignore me. I never asked you to chill, you did after going full
my dear friend :)
Why do all bronies resort to autism when they've been proven wrong? Why do bronies think this is trolling anyway? Well, if it was trolling they're all taking the bait lol
Oh man, this trollfic is the worst kind of bad.
Its not only a piece of garbage, but also boring and unfunny.
If your going to write bad trollfics, you should at least make them so bad that they becomes hilarious.
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>Trollfic
>but it's also boring
>you're
1331951 You managed to boil down my big review to one post. Cheers, mate!
Masterpiece what a masterpiece, you see all off you, trollfic's are a another type of art, another type of story, and they are awsome.
Bravo Feefle Bravo
1332551 I fully agree. Trollfics are, in their own way, art. But that means it is possible to create a bad trollfic, just as it is possible to create a bad song or drawing.
This is a bad trollfic. It's clumsy and transparent. This story is to trollfics as this story would be to actual fics: dreadful.
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>Still thinks it's a trollfic
The first one was the best, I think you need to return to your roots
The title was funny though