• Published 18th Oct 2022
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Corruption of Loyalty - TetrahedronDash



If you lost your only friends who happened to be your best friends, how would you react? Would you slip into insanity?

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Comment posted by TetrahedronDash deleted Oct 20th, 2022

Chapter 4 - Death of Magic has finally been released! Enjoy the new chapter y'all! x3

I've went back to Chapter's 1 and 2 and added some stuff to it and fixed it a bit to make it as longer as I was able to. You can go check that out if you want!

" I'm sorry to say this, but I have decided that you are too much of a hassle. So I've decided to kick you out from the Elements of Harmony and from our friendship. "

Can she do that? I don’t think the tree will allow that.

" Everything. From the way you are, to being a self right entitled cunt. It's final. You can't change anything, as it is my decision, the Princess of Friendship. So pack your belongings and get the fuck out of here. You have ten minutes. "

She lives there?

" And also, from this day forth, you are no longer the Element of Loyalty. It doesn't matter. We will find a replacement for you. You are easily replaceable, unlike me and the others. Now get out. "

Does she really believe that? Does she really think it’s her decision?

" Freakin' creep. " Said Rainbow Dash, before flying down to the ground inside the castle and closing the doors.

He’s the creep?

Rainbow Dash looked in the cabinets for something that can make her fall asleep temporarily. Opening cabinets after cabinets, she finally opened one that had containers of premade Ammonia. She grabbed a container out along with a small towel and went back upstairs out of the laboratory. When she got back to the stairs in the main hallway, she walked back upstairs to the second floor before getting ready to hatch her genius plan.

Does she even know what that does?

" You're going to have to try harder then that to kill the Princess of Friendship! " Said Twilight as she used her magic and started forcefully levitating Rainbow Dash, slamming her into the flasks in the laboratory and the edges of the worktables, causing cuts and broken glass to penetrate her muzzle, protruding blood from the cuts.

Why not teleport?

" Looks like you're next Rarity. " Said Rainbow Dash before heading towards Carousel Boutique.

Isn’t spike there?

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I could have let her teleport to Canterlot Castle and get Rainbow Dash in deep shit with the princesses, but I have something else in plan for the ending. Don't worry though. There will be a ending for everyone in the story eventually. Don't want to spoil too much of my ideas for the endings tho, lol.

Great chapter, talk about serious heartburn, two down three to go, eager to see what’s next.

Why did you delete your own comment?

I might take a day off today from continuing to write the fifth chapter. I feel like I need a break perhaps. I've been powerhousing the chapters out each day since the release of the story. Depends. I might continue working on it today, or not.

Hope y'all are having a good day! Also happy Applejack Day! Lol.

As soon as Halloween is over, I'll try to get back to working on the story! Remember to have a safe and amazing Halloween and/or Nightmare Night y'all!

Man, I Wondered what happened to this story haven't gotten updated in a year

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