I feel like we’re missing parts of the conflict. The other 5 left rainbow dash, but why? Rainbow Dash feel betrayed, but why? How did cutting herself start? Why was applejack the last one to leave. There are so many questions.

I too have questions about how this all began, it’s a good start to a good tragedy fic, but it’s missing important details one of which how it all began, but in all I’m intrigued to read more.