When sixteen-year-old virtual Japanese pop idol Hatsune Miku is bored at her computer one night, she clicks on a video labeled "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic". Little does she know that the adventure is just about to begin!
Not sure what this means, but I'm 13, I'm female and I'm a major pegasister, gamer, whovian and weeaboo.
When sixteen-year-old virtual Japanese pop idol Hatsune Miku is bored at her computer one night, she clicks on a video labeled "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic". Little does she know that the adventure is just about to begin!
comment please? thanks, just wanna hear whatcha think
1321702Yes, gotta read now!
Ouch... You've made the Mane 6 absolutely two-dimensional stereotypes, the entire fic so far is shorter than most normal chapters, and it feels beyond rushed. At least your spelling and grammar are great, and that counts for something.
Take your time with the next chapter, and that should bring the quality up a little.
i smell cheese, and not the good kind.
you are on thin ice. keep going
neat concept, Miku in Eequestria, i like it so far
Idea is good but the characters seem kinda one dimensional and and the story is really rushed, for what happened in this chapter, i would suggest about 1000 words
im sorry guys! i didn't spend too much time on this
AUTO FAVORITE AND LIKE FOR HATSUNE MIKU TO BE IN THIS
out on the whole thing, i excpect this though miku is my main love for music.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ guards:you may not pass!
*twilight enters to get miku through*
miku:hmmm, i guess its time for a...
twilight:hmmm?
miku:KILLING SPREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
twilight:*gasp
*miku finally kills shining armor with her hoofheld SMGs
twilight:FUCK YOUUUU!
*miku kills twilight*
miku:all done!*smiles*
*celestia enters the room and gasp*
miku:YOU MAY NOT KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!*kills celestia and other main 6 come in*
miku:I WIL KILL YOU AAALL FOR KNOWING!!!!!!!!!*kills them and flys away from castle and canterlot blows up*
miku:MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
miku:who are you?
me:lets just say i am a savior.*hours later*
miku:why didnt you kill me?
me: lets just say im, batman.*puts on glasses and explosions follow behind me and puts on glasses with a guitar tune playing*dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
only heard of miku, but this seams to be to my liking I'll read on. typing with one hand is very entertaining.
MOAR PLZ!!!!!!!
Would have been more fun if she was speaking Japanese
This must be continued. I'm looking forward to see how it continues. Good work so far.
This is pretty cool.