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FederalPony


I was a writer and gamer before, but when I became a brony in late 2014 I just had to write and create for a fandom and show I fell in love with.

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The darkspawn over here this devastated everybody but Spike MVP of the the chapter

This story is quite good. I hope you continue working on it. I can already see the effects of the dragon age Dory leaking in.

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Thank you, I’ve been working on the fic for quite a while and began to type out chapter 9, of course it’s also posted on AO3. To note thought from chapter four things may get confusing at first, but a second fic called the Western Lunar crisis will help clarify some details. IE: for example Luna’s absence will be explained and even the crazy laws put in place, but not only that Western Lunar crisis runs parallel to Equestria age. In other words while (minor spoiler) the mane 6 are in the new world Equestria is fighting the dark spawn at home.

Lowering the letter Spike just stood their tears streaming down his eyes, the mares just stood there furious for what the letter said and appalled by the princesses response. Yet something was off, taking the letter Twilight looked over at the writing and sure enough it was Celestias. Twilight hasn't had the chance to view Luna's letters, but Celestias, she knew her writing and this was Celestia pretending to be her sister, when she gets back she’s going to have a little chat with her teacher.

I don't understand what the problem was with this part. The elements of Harmony and they choose them not celestia. So this part is kind of confused me. Why would they be mad it? Would this be a simple truth.

“Little miss generosity, please, you call yourself generous yet you lead ponies on for your selfish gain!” Rainbow's accusation, though a bit more accurate, was met by cheers from a few stallions, one of whom was Thunderlane, a pony Rainbow knew dated Rarity.

I just think this one was funny. This isn't 100%. She belongs to the streets moment

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Its kind of complicated, this was informed to my by another reader on my Archive of our own account, he also gave me inspiration to extend the fanfic in some parts, I wasn't influenced over this he just pointed things out, one of which is the Elements of harmony. Let me elaborate through the story, Celestia believes the mane 6 are better off without spike due to them being the bearers of harmony and the chosen ones of equestria, Luna doesn't think that and sees that Spike is just as important as the mane 6. Where as Celestia sticks to the old ways of equestria, Luna tries to change it, an example of this is the persecution of Thestrals (batponies), Luna want to abolish the persecution and help the bat ponies.

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Then shouldn't the nobles only be trying to kill Luna if Celestia pretty much agrees with him. Unless you're the same, they're this out for power which would be kind of silly because they would be screwed over by themselves because they can't move the sun and moon. Unless in this world they have the secrets of doing that again.

Still kinda working on it, their mostly out for power, but again still working on it.

Read the story in one day and its amazing. Im a bit turned off by the use of profanity but in some parts it gets really good like rainbow telling rarity off. Ive been a member of the fiction fandom since 2021 and im amazed you already wrote 2 stories while im stuck here trying to tackle my writers block on a mega epic story like yours. Kudos to u brother.

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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it. Though i’m still writing it, the summer heat here has cause some writers block, but now that it’s cooling off, I’ll be able to continue it.

I’m sorry your writers block has you stuck, I hope though that it clears up for you.

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