Western Lunar Crisis

MEquestria Age
MLP: FiM
Dragon Age
Adventure
Horror
With the Gala over Twilight and her friends can finally rest and relax, but when a mysterious vessel arrives on Equestrias coast Its sparks a new adventure. Tasked with finding answers to a new threat at home, they're soon thrust into survival.
Sex
Gore
Violence
Profanity
Crossover
Human
Alt. Universe
Spike
Celestia
Luna
Main 6
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nightshroud96

nightshroud96 #1 · Jan 28th, 2023 · · · A captain and a princess ·

How is it going?

FederalPony

FederalPony #2 · Jan 30th, 2023 · · · A captain and a princess ·

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Doing good, hit a ditch on the writing, but it’s coming along, you?

nightshroud96

nightshroud96 #3 · Jan 30th, 2023 · · · A captain and a princess ·

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Things were stressful lately

FederalPony

FederalPony #4 · Jan 30th, 2023 · · · A captain and a princess ·

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Sorry to hear that, they all better now?

nightshroud96

nightshroud96 #5 · Jan 30th, 2023 · · · A captain and a princess ·

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Not exactly

FederalPony

FederalPony #6 · Jan 30th, 2023 · · · A captain and a princess ·

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What happened, if you don’t mind me asking?

Drago Cadenza

Drago Cadenza #7 · Apr 8th, 2023 · · · Plan of action ·

Yeesh, Celestia's acting like a dictator here. I mean, she's cruel to not just her niece and future nephew, but also to two survivors of a village destroyed by Darkspawn. And her wanting peace? Nope, if anything, I bet she's wanting to be in control of Equestria, her subjects, Cadence (with threats to 'Clip' her future husband to keep her in line and not allowing her to be a normal mare), and those that don't agree with her or are outside of 'her' boundaries are punished by getting no aid from the military, stallions being permanently 'clipped', and mares being downright executed if they decide to have a 'night of passion' like Cadence and Shining did. Keep in mind that what I'm listing here are just a few examples from this chapter and the next one alone; because if I were to add every example from not just this story, but from Equestria Age as well, this comment would probably take all day to post out.

In short, even if it's already obvious I believe Celestia is a Tyrant; basically Daybreaker in all but name; as she's wanting to rule Equestria and her subjects like one would run a dictatorship, if Equestria isn't already one in all but name already. Though I do hope she either realizes what she's done and makes thing right (very unlikely, but just throwing it out there) or she gets defeated and is either imprisoned in stone, banished to tartarus, or killed off if no more options are left, and both Luna and Cadence rule both Equestria and the Crystal Empire respectively, since they did get along instantly at the Grand Galloping Gala in this story (a more likely scenario).

But that's just my two cents right there. And if I got anything wrong, feel free to let me know.

FederalPony

FederalPony #8 · Apr 8th, 2023 · · · Scavenging a lead ·

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Well the mares that were executed were the initial ones that started to clip stallions, since they believed in the all mares equestria Celestia promised them. They were executed however, cause Celestia wanted to take credit for it, while also making herself look like the hero.

The Crimson Pony