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Derpy Daring Do

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Daring Do and Derpy go on a breathtaking adventure to find the biggest treasure of all time guarded by one of the most feared dragons. Will Derpy be a good sidekick for Daring Do, or will she just be a nuisance? Both ponies, side by side, have to fight their way through multiple traps, and there is only one thing in mind; THAT TREASURE!

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Cloud Wander

Cloud Wander #1 · Sep 21st, 2012 · · ·

"The red monster hid the wall hard."

Probably "hit."

“I have to hand it to you Derpy."

Maybe "give it to you."

Reedling

Reedling #2 · Oct 22nd, 2012 · · ·

replace the words hand with Hoof is how I deal with it,unless a wild Gilda appears other then that the story brightened up my day(from what I've read so far)