Matter of life or death

After being diagnosed with a fatal disease, Fluttershy has only 3 months to live. Her friends won’t let this happen and will do their best to keep her alive. But will they succeed ?

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MatTheBook

MatTheBook #1 · Aug 18th, 2022 · 2 · · A fatal disease ·

Friends are willing to do no matter what to help each other.

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #2 · Aug 18th, 2022 · · 1 · A fatal disease ·

"The problem is that the princesses are visiting the dragons for... royal things I guess, and Spike is with them so we can't tell them about that. I think they don't even know about Fluttershy disease. I was thinking about call Cadence but she must take care about the Cristal Empire. Plus I don't think that she have enough magic either." Twilight finally said.

Crystal

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #3 · Aug 18th, 2022 · 1 · 1 · A fatal disease ·

I dont even know what is killing her.

'Oh no Fluttershy has a fatal disease!'
"Ok but what is it"?????

"How does she have it?"
"Where did it come from"?
"When did she get it"?

You can't leave the readers with unanswered questions.

Flutterprincess

Flutterprincess #4 · Aug 18th, 2022 · · · A fatal disease ·

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Actually, I wanted to explain those questions in the next chapters.

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I’ll fix this, thanks for tell it to me ^^

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #5 · Aug 18th, 2022 · · 1 · A fatal disease ·

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good

Lulamoon-Crystal

Lulamoon-Crystal #6 · Aug 19th, 2022 · 1 · · A fatal disease ·

This is pretty interesting

Flutterprincess

Flutterprincess #7 · Aug 19th, 2022 · · · A fatal disease ·

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Thank You ^^

_Lotus_

_Lotus_ #8 · Aug 19th, 2022 · 1 · · A fatal disease ·

I find this idea really interesting! Cant wait to read more :D

Flutterprincess

Flutterprincess #9 · Aug 19th, 2022 · · · A fatal disease ·

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Thank you, I’m working on it ^^

Paloma

Paloma #10 · Aug 20th, 2022 · 1 · · A fatal disease ·

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I guess you never read suspense fictions before... it was meant to hold tension in the story. However, suspense can be used... like for example of a fiction that I like... mystery fiction holds alot of suspense. Dun dun duuuuun O_O

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