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Lightningstripe25


MLP theorist, analyst, and reviewer for G4-G5, and vector shield maker on DA. But I enjoy writing stories in my free time, usually tragedy or things with strong emotions. (pfp by SchattenspielRex)

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A few days ago, I got into a writing challenge with someone from an mlp discord server (which i will not name). The challenge was just for fun, and it was only us two. The rules were you had to write a 1.6K word story on a random character and theme that was given to you, and we had 2 days to write it. I got "Fluttershy" and "Shopping", and this is what I came up with, enjoy!


"When Rarity asked Fluttershy to help her run the canterlot Carousel while Sassy Saddles is sick, she only agreed because she wouldn't have to socialize. However, the afternoon rush caught them by surprise, and Rarity runs out of ribbons. Since she has to stay to run the shop, Fluttershy ends up having to go buy some. Can she handle the pressure of a fully crowded store? Or is it all in her head?"

ps: keep in mind, I only had 48 hours to come up with and write the story, so of course it's not my best one, be reasonable in the comments.
(Also, ignore the fact that the raccoons are from Manehattan, just go along with it.)

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That was a good story.

Comment posted by Lightningstripe25 deleted Sep 2nd, 2022

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Thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed

Honestly, I don't think that Fluttershy isn't this terrified in a crowd anymore, but it was a great story nonetheless. :yay:

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Thats true, she's gotten a lot better since she first started. This is supposed to take place around the time of season 5, not long after the Canterlot Carousel was opened, but i'm glad you enjoyed it! :heart:

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