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Technically, Twilight is her "Father" right?
Also, you need to go over these chapters with a spellchecker and check grammar in some places.
Okay how did a unicorn pull this off?
A: You have 4 alicortn princesses that have ruled for centuries at this point and ruled well so how did she get so many ponies to openly betray them?
B:Why did she kill the other but left Luna alive?
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I think she’s more like a doctor, who performed a caesarean (so to speak)
Also, reminded me of this.
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Good story, I definitely enjoyed it.
Are you going to continue with this setting?
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1 - They were probably too afraid. She must’ve drained and killed the others by that point.
2 - Sick joke? Luna spent a thousand years alone on the moon, now she could rot in the dungeon for another millennium.
11231446 A: very good question!
A type of question I've had rants with myself many a time. Ex. "How could Celestia rule on her own for a thousand years, and then nearly loose it all repeatedly (with her sister now back and helping her) in the few short years of the show? C'mon writers, the heck?"
In this stories case; The answer is: Complacency. They became very comfortable in their successful rule of many centuries. In turn, became blinded to things happening right under their noses, until it was too late. [SciFi reference: The Jedi fell in the same fashion.]
A pony with a plan, access, and the element of surprise (easy with the above paradigm) can be able to pull off nearly anything.
With tragic and horrifying results.
B: Celestia was the example, and the crowning achievement of the coup, thus displayed prominently as a power play. Luna, almost joined the others, but was barely deemed a useful plaything for the guards, and further the insult to the sisters legacy. The other two, were deemed completely irrelevant, and buried.
Oh, and the ponies? Quickly demoralized by the shock and awe of the princesses being dethroned, and felt completely helpless to do anything about it. So they did nothing.
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Thank you
Yes. The next part will be the re-installation of the princesses, bringing the status quo (Equestria) back to normalcy
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All but the ponies i could by in that. I would have hoped that they learn but i guess not. I hope they learn after this one about it.
too good a story to leave this in it.
they were perfectly preserved as if no time had passed, without any preservation spellcraft that wee could detect."
[spell craft] [we]
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Fixed. Always grateful for a wee bit of spit & polish.
Thanks!
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Really? I haven't actually read this story yet, but even the Mane Six?
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The Mane Six lived out their lives happily, long before this story takes place. I like to think that ponies live 150-200 years on average. Where this is set more than 900 years after the show/time of the Mane Six. Only the Alicorns (Twilight inc.) are still around from that time since they're long lived.