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Disembodied_Pony


I'm no writer, things just pop into my head

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This is a collection of short stories, forming the prequel for Parts 1-3.

Parts 1-3 of what?

"Princess?" what was it like when you first got to this place?

looking forward to more of this story. It is one of the best series I have seen recently

Haven't seen a proper smiting in years. Do continue.

Humans don't act like humans and Nightmare Moon is OOC. Also misanthropy levels are off the charts. Sorry, but I'm out.

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I completely disagree. In my 80+ years I have met people who could replace the two children of the
supplier with little to no adjustment, not once but several times. As for the supplier herself.
Just look around you, the self-centered CEO, Heads of conglomerates and countries who care
nothing for the people who work for them or who they rule and are in it only for the money
and/or the power are only too common. Without her money and power, the supplier would be
reduced to the level of the garden variety Karen convinced that the world is there only to serve her
and if she says it, it must be so. The male of the species being just as bad.
As for Nightmare Moon being OOC. We saw so little of that character that there is little to nothing to
judge the authors choices on.

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Thank You, you Got it! :pinkiehappy:

Giving the benefit of the doubt, I'd wager they didn't read anything outside of this one passing chapter entry, and I can understand that it takes a lot of setup to get to this point, which would be missed. Akin to walking into the last 20 minutes of 'The Thing' and not getting why they're burning the place down and a weird creature bursts from the basement's floor, lol.
On the Humans thing; admittedly, I haven't ever written humans before. So I Hope that is what he means, scary otherwise :twilightsheepish:

The company president, is a fusion of my own mother, and my ex-neighbor/mother (same generation). The firstborn son; a fusion of her son & me. You know what they say; write what you know. The second born, is a little more second hand and sparse of details, but lifted from that neighbors granddaughter. An unstable childhood she had, and now he's a womanizing pig and proud of it, rofl!

On a side note, this chapter made someone else so mad, that they down voted every piece of work I ever made, and your previous comment too! :rainbowlaugh: Its easy to tell when they go from largely zeros, to ones.

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