Summer is here, and what better way to celebrate than with a pool party at Pinkie Pie's house? Everyone starts out laughing, joking, and having a good time until one practical joke goes too far, culminating into the entire party becoming a little out of hand. Just a little story about youth, friendship, and a lot of pool water.
"There’s no time for sanitation in war, rookie! Now grab a couple of balloons and let’s take this enemy down!"
I laughed at this comment so hard once I heard in my head a real soldier saying this and that made it 10x funnier
That was a good story.
Your dialogue writing is excellent! Very natural and in character; I could easily imagine this being an actual episode or short.