This was great. Can't wait for more

I approve.

Hot

Enjoying the read and looking forward to reading more.

Where are you writing the cyoa

This was really good please make more

I really appreciate the simplicity and the subtly of the opening, which makes the more brazen presnentation of the erotic aspects all the more striking and thrilling. A very talented piece that I hope will some day continue.

I would enjoy watching your style evolve, the pacing and imagery are scholarly.

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Thanks for the comment! If there was one to inspire me, it would be this one. Half of me wants to continue, and the other half feels like that would be wasting my talent and time. All of me is currently in a creative block, and this got me out last time so maybe...

No promises, sorry.

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It's good to see you still have creative energy yet. Whatever pursuits that leads you to, I just hope it brings you fulfillment. Whether or not this picks up again I'm pleased to contribute in this tiny way.

I like it. The story reads very much like a fairy tale.

Monk

I very much would like to see more from you.

Great story so far! I can't wait for the next update!